Question

15．假定你是李華，你班同學(xué)進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)關(guān)于"公交車上是否該讓座？"主題的大討論．一些人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該讓座；另一些人認(rèn)為這是一種好行為．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社寫一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹討論情況，并談?wù)勛约旱淖龇ê涂捶ǎ?br />Dear editor，
Recently my classmates had a heated discussion about whether we should offer seats on bus or not．
Some students are against offering seats on bus．The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired．The old and disabled should own separate buses specially provided for them．On the other hand，the others are in favor of it．They think it is a good deed．
As for me，I always offer my seat to women who are pregnant or holding a baby．I also offer my seat to the senior citizens．Actually，I offer my seat to whoever really needs it．In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired
他們認(rèn)為的原因是，所有乘客都已經(jīng)有了自己的座位上的平等權(quán)利，尤其是當(dāng)他們累了．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization．
在我看來(lái)，我認(rèn)為在公共汽車上提供的座位，雖然一個(gè)小小的行動(dòng)，但是象征著善良和我們的文明水平．

解答 Dear editor，
Recently my classmates had a heated discussion about whether we should offer seat on bus or not．Some students are against offering seats on bus．The reason they hold is that all passengers have equal rights to have their own seats，especially when they are tired（高分句型一）．The old and disabled should own separate buses specially provided for them．On the other hand，the others are in favor of it．They think it is a good deed．
As for me，I always offer my seat to women who are pregnant or holding a baby．I also offer my seat to the senior citizens．Actually，I offer my seat to whoever really needs it．In my opinion，I think offering seats on bus，a small act though，is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization（高分句型二）．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．