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5．假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 不久前參加了他們學(xué)校的漢語學(xué)習(xí)小組．由于感覺學(xué)習(xí)起來困難很大，他打算退出．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．勸他不要放棄；
2．給他一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議．
注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you have joined the Chinese Learning Group in your school．It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）I hope you won't give up．
Learning Chinese well will be very important and useful for you．It can help you learn more about Chinese history and culture．Moreover，it can help you communicate with Chinese people better．To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）Why not have a try？If there is anything I can do to help you，do tell me．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 不久前參加了他們學(xué)校的漢語學(xué)習(xí)小組．由于感覺學(xué)習(xí)起來困難很大，他打算退出．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：勸他不要放棄；給他一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：have difficulty in 在做某事方面有困難；give up放棄；Moreover而且；communicate with溝通，交流；In addition另外；
It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）
To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）
In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'm glad to hear that you have joined the Chinese Learning Group in your school． It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）I hope you won't give up．
       Learning Chinese well will be very important and useful for you．It can help you learn more about Chinese history and culture．Moreover，it can help you communicate with Chinese people better．To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）Why not have a try？If there is anything I can do to help you，do tell me．
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                      Li hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．