Question

18．你校要舉行一次英語演講比賽，話題是"暢想未來，享受歡樂"．請你用英語寫一篇不少于120詞的演講稿．你可以從科技發(fā)展帶給人們未來的生活、學習和工作的影響，以及如何迎接未來、適應新生活等方面展開描述和討論．
注意：1、演講稿的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
  2、不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱．
Hello，everyone!I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here．
                                                                
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing，we can also spend more time traveling around the world and enjoying other amusements．我們不但有足夠的食物和衣服，我們還可以花更多的時間環(huán)游世界以及享受其他樂趣．
高分句型二：
Therefore，we should work harder today，making preparations to make more contributions to the development of the future society and the world．因此，現(xiàn)在我們應該更努力的工作，隨時為以后能為這個社會和時間做貢獻而做準備．
句型一 Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing…該句是一個部分倒裝句，not only..but also..連接并列從句，not only后面跟的從句應使用倒裝句，將主語同謂語部分的助動詞進行位置的交換．
句型二  making preparations to make more contributions to..此處使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語
除此以外，還有以下重要短語和固定用法：
thanks to     be full of    make contribution to   adapt to

解答 Hello，everyone!I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here． Thanks to the great development in science and technology，we are sure to live a happier and more wonderful life in the future．Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing，we can also spend more time traveling around the world and enjoying other amusements．（高分句型一）It will make our spare time more interesting and colorful．Furthermore，we will have less stress either from our study or from the work since we can work more efficiently．However，our future life is not just full of amusement and joy，but also of challenge．Therefore，we should work harder today，making preparations to make more contributions to the development of the future society and the world．（高分句型二）Only in this way can we adapt to the future life and enjoy ourselves when it comes．
That's all．Thank you!

點評 本書面表達為提綱類，該類書面表達要點明確，規(guī)定了考生的表述思路．寫作時應將提綱中所列舉的要點全部涉及，不能遺漏，語言表達明確，言簡意賅．