Question

下面短文中有10 處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個的單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計分。

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited ∧ a bus to come at a stop.

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30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner

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had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught

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it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize

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my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now,

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whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

                   closing