Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

The day of the balloon festival, I felt as light as a hot-air balloon. This year I wouldn’t just be watching. I’d be riding in Mr. J’s truck, following the flight of the balloon and meeting it when it came down.

It was a perfect day. Dad and I drove down the road, circled along the lake and turned into the field that was being used as a parking area. Dad pointed to the lake. “That’s where the balloon festival will take place.” he said. We came to a stop and I got out of the car. And then I saw it, a white bird with black stripes, brown head, and skinny legs. It screamed and beat its wings in the dirt in front of the cars that were driving downhills. Its wings looked broken. Suddenly it cried bitterly and flew off.

“Dad,” I called, but my father was watching the balloons.

“It’s a killdeer(北美喧鵒).” A silver-haired old woman said to me, adding that there must have been a nest here somewhere. “In the parking area?” I asked. She nodded firmly. “It was a nesting place before it became a parking area. No one told the killdeer about the balloon festival!”

“Jack!” Dad called “Isn’t it time you went down to meet Mr. J?”

“I have got to go.” I said to the woman but she pointed with her walking stick. There, on the ground was a perfect nest of eggs, looking like pebbles(卵石). They were almost in the path of cars, trucks and motorbikes.

Suddenly, the parent bird was back to its nest and its wings both twisted again. “Jack!” Dad called again. “The balloons are ready to fly.”

“Dad! I am…” A truck roared over the hill. Brakes(剎車) screamed and dust flew. “What’s the matter?” asked Dad angrily from the truck.

注意:

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；

2.至少使用 5 個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

“Dad, I am not going,” I said.

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Paragraph 2:

Soon a number of vehicles surrounded the nest.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

“Dad, I’m not going.” I said. “I have to stay here so the cars won’t roll over the nest. With so many things to deal with, my dad drove away to tell Mr. J. Then the woman reminded me that it was time to come up with a plan to protect the nest. Just then several cars pulled over. That was when a plan took sudden, perfect shape in my head. I ran over to turn to the car drivers for help. It was not long before they understood everything. More drivers joined in. They parked the cars in the way to protect the nest.

Paragraph 2:

Soon a ring of vehicles surrounded the nest. Nothing or nobody is allowed to get close to the eggs. By noon the festival was over and people began to leave. When Dad came to pick me up, he was astonished to see the killdeer and its nest of eggs safe and sound. Having failed to take part in the balloon festival, I felt no regret. Hungry and tired as I was, I was overjoyed when thinking of the efforts I had made to protect the eggs

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者和父親一起來參加熱氣球節(jié)，看到了一只北美喧鵒，一位滿頭銀發(fā)的老婦人對(duì)我說，并補(bǔ)充說這里的某個(gè)地方一定有一個(gè)巢穴，老人說，鳥巢在停車場，幾乎擋住了小汽車、卡車和摩托車的去路。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：爸爸，我不去了。短文要接著續(xù)寫是如何保護(hù)鳥巢的。第二段的開頭：很快一圈車輛包圍了巢穴。短文接著續(xù)寫成功地保護(hù)了鳥巢，父親來接作者時(shí)的態(tài)度以及作者時(shí)如何看待沒能參加熱氣球節(jié)、保護(hù)鳥的意義以及自己的感受。

續(xù)寫時(shí)要求使用文章中的關(guān)鍵詞，所以這就增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉文章的主要大意以及關(guān)鍵詞，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。