Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
　  Telling lies is what we are taught not to do, but in some cases, telling lies seems to be what we have to do.　
注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；
　　�、诔�詩歌外，文體不限；
　　　③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活或?qū)W習(xí)中的一個事例，寫出真情實感。
　　�、芪闹胁坏猛嘎﹤�人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
　　�、菰~數(shù)不少于120字左右。
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

With great importance attached to honesty, children are taught not to tell lies. However, there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.
My best friend Li Hua used to be rather poor in English, especially his terrible and strange pronunciation. Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English. Bearing a heavy load in mind, he felt desperate and upset. He dared not speak English in class. When asked questions by our English teacher, he was always nervous and embarrassed. The classmates always made fun of him, saying that he was speaking Japanese! Once I met him in the corridor. Therefore I praised that his pronunciation was very special and kind of like Obama's. Believing what I said, he got greatly inspired. He spared no effort to practice speaking English every day.  Now, he can speak English fluently with a perfect accent.
Recently, he told me that it wasn't long before he knew that what I said just a little white lie but he appreciated it badly, without which, he said, he couldn't have achieved such great progress.

試題分析：本書面表達是一篇開放式作文，話題是“要不要說謊言？”，貼近考生實際生活，對既定的話題進行討論，考生有一定的自由發(fā)揮空間，暢所欲言，各抒己見。寫作的時候注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如attach to，be poor in，make oneself understood，make fun of, spare no effort to, long before, make great progress , achieve such great progress；并注意了句子的銜接如：however，when，once，before等等。there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.這句用了定語從句，Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English.用了倒裝句，Bearing a heavy load in mind, he felt desperate and upset.用了非謂語動詞，Believing what I said, he got greatly inspired.用了名詞性從句。