Question

假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，看到同學(xué)們互贈紙質(zhì)新年賀卡，認(rèn)為這會造成浪費和污染。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文向校英語報投稿，建議大家使用電子賀卡（e-cards）。

1．方便快捷：電子郵件傳送：      2．省錢：網(wǎng)站免費下載；

3．內(nèi)容非富：可增加音樂動畫：    4．環(huán)保：不會造成污染浪費。

參考詞匯：  動畫animation

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version

  New Year’s Day is drawing near and as usual many of my classmates begin to send paper cards to each other, friends and family. I think it is really a waste of money and it can also cause pollution. So I suggest using e-cards instead of paper-cards. First, it is very convenient to send e-cards. It just takes a click and our friends will receive them in one or two seconds. Second, free e-cards can help us save money. Third, with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. Last but not least, e-cards are environmentally friendly as no real materials are used. Since they have so many advantages, why not have a try?

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語提示的提綱類作文。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1、文章內(nèi)容要齊全；（1）方便快捷：電子郵件傳送；（2）省錢：網(wǎng)站免費下載；（3）內(nèi)容非富：可增加音樂動畫；（4）環(huán)保：不會造成污染浪費。2.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；3.人稱：一、三人稱；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯、句型和短語，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語使文章自然、流暢。

【范文亮點】1.使用了高級詞匯：environmentally，短語Last but not least  2.高級句型：with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. it is very convenient to send e-cards

考點：考查學(xué)生英語語言的運用能力。