【題目】書面表達(dá) 寫一篇短文

李華減肥以后，感到身體疲倦、虛弱，不知如何是好，于是他寫了一封電子郵件向健康專家求教。請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，以李華的名義寫一封郵件。詞數(shù)100左右。

原因：覺得自己太胖，體重不斷增加，擔(dān)心形象不美，有同學(xué)罵他。

過程： 1. 去健身房，兩三次就放棄了，感覺太累也沒時(shí)間。

2. 節(jié)食，堅(jiān)持了大約一個(gè)星期，經(jīng)常餓得不能繼續(xù)他的學(xué)習(xí)。

3. 悄悄服用減肥藥，一開始有效果，體重迅速下降，但減肥藥對他產(chǎn)生副作用。

Dear Health Expert,

I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help. _____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Health Expert,

I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help. I feel I am a little too fat. What’s worse, I am putting on weight all the time. I am very worried about my figure and how I look. I even fear that some of my classmates call me names.

At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up just because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. Once I tried going on a diet. However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies. Then I bought and took weight-loss pills in secret. Shortly after, they did work and I was losing weight fast. But soon I felt tired and weak sometimes.

I know those pills usually have bad effects on our health. Thus, I don’t know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give some good advice?

Best wishes

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信。文章給出了提綱式漢語提示。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意一下幾點(diǎn)：

(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全：減肥原因；減肥過程； 尋求建議。

(2)人稱：以第一人稱為主。

(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。

(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】1.使用高級句型：(1) At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up just because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. (2) Thus, I don’t know what I should do.

2.使用了過渡詞語：What’s worse, I am putting on weight all the time.

3.使用了重要短語I am very worried about my figure and how I look.

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