5.假定你是李林,你們當(dāng)?shù)卣谡心家吧锉Wo(hù)志愿者,你希望成為其中一員,請(qǐng)按要求用英文給委員會(huì)寫(xiě)一封信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:
1、個(gè)人情況(年齡,性別,學(xué)歷).
2、個(gè)人條件(愛(ài)好動(dòng)、植物,善于交際,樂(lè)于助人,熟悉本地情況…).
3、承諾(提供最佳服務(wù)).
注意:1、詞數(shù)100左右,注意詳略和行文連貫.
    2、注意英文書(shū)信格式.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Lin.I'd like to work as a volunteer for the Wildlife Protection Committee.
                                      

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息當(dāng)?shù)卣谡心家吧锉Wo(hù)志愿者,你希望成為其中一員,請(qǐng)按要求用英文給委員會(huì)寫(xiě)一封信,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):個(gè)人情況(年齡,性別,學(xué)歷)個(gè)人條件(愛(ài)好動(dòng)、植物,善于交際,樂(lè)于助人,熟悉本地情況…).承諾(提供最佳服務(wù)). 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):What's more而且;have a good command of knowledge 精通;be familiar with熟悉;be good at擅長(zhǎng);do my best 盡全力
I'm a boy of sixteen years old and I'm a high school student in the city where there is a big preserve.(高分句型一)
I have great affection for wildlife.What's more,I have a good command of knowledge about wildlife and I'm familiar with the city.(高分句型二)
I'm good at communication and I'm very glad to help others.So I think I'm suitable for serving the Wildlife Protection Committee.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Sir/Madam
      My name is Li Lin.I'd like to work as a volunteer for the wildlife protection committee.
      I'm a boy of sixteen years old and I'm a high school student in the city where there is a big preserve.(高分句型一)I have great affection for wildlife.What's more,I have a good command of knowledge about wildlife and I'm familiar with the city.(高分句型二)I'm good at communication and I'm very glad to help others.So I think I'm suitable for serving the Wildlife Protection Committee.(高分句型三)
     Please allow me to be a volunteer for the WPC.I promise I'll do my best to provide best service for it.
     Looking forward to your earliest reply.
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Lin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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