8.假定你是李華,Tom是你的美國好友,他三年前來過你所在的城市.最近他寫信詢問你所在城市的變化.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封回信.
要點(diǎn):1.謝謝他的來信;
2.列舉城市的一些變化;
3.歡迎他再次來玩.
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter.Over the past three years,the city has witnessed great changes.(高分句型一)First,the environment is increasingly pleasant.Most high-pollution industries have been moved out of the city.It is now a new city with lots of flowers and trees.What's more,the transportation is more convenient.We have opened two underground railways,which have effectively solved the traffic problem.(高分句型二)
I remember last time you came here,the city amusement park was being built.(高分句型三)Now it has been open to the public.I wish you could pay a visit again and we could have fun in the park.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息 Tom是你的美國好友,他三年前來過你所在的城市.最近他寫信詢問你所在城市的變化.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封回信.寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):謝謝他的來信;列舉城市的一些變化;歡迎他再次來玩.  2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):Over the past three years在過去的三年里;What's more而且;pay a visit參觀,拜訪;have fun玩的高興
Over the past three years,the city has witnessed great changes.(高分句型一)
We have opened two underground railways,which have effectively solved the traffic problem.(高分句型二)
I remember last time you came here,the city amusement park was being built.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Tom,
      Thank you for your letter.Over the past three years,the city has witnessed great changes.(高分句型一)First,the environment is increasingly pleasant.Most high-pollution industries have been moved out of the city.It is now a new city with lots of flowers and trees.What's more,the transportation is more convenient.We have opened two underground railways,which have effectively solved the traffic problem.(高分句型二)
       I remember last time you came here,the city amusement park was being built.(高分句型三)Now it has been open to the public.I wish you could pay a visit again and we could have fun in the park.
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

練習(xí)冊(cè)系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:完形填空

18.The cultures of the East and the West really distinguish from each other a lot.This is because the culture systems are two separate systems(21)D.
The origin of the eastern cultures is mainly from two countries:China and India.Both of the two cultures are gestated(孕育)by(22)A.In China,the mother river is the Yellow River(23)Cthe Indian one is the Hindu River.These two cultures were(24)B   for several thousand years and formed their own styles Then in the Tang Dynasty of China,the Chinese culture(25)Awent overseas to Japan,(26)B   into the Japanese society and(27)Cthe Japanese culture nowadays.Though a bit different from the Chinese one,it(28)B to the same system.
When the two mother rivers gave birth to the eastern culture,another famous culture was(29)Con the Mesopotamian Plain(美索不達(dá)米亞平原)-the Mesopotamian Civilization.This civilization later on developed into the cultures of Ancient Greece and Ancient Rome.And these two are well-known as the(30)A  of the European culture.(31)B    the Chinese culture,the European one also(32)Awaters.When the colonists of England(33)C   in America,their culture went with them over,the Atlantic Ocean.So the American culture doesn't(34)A   from the European one a lot.
At the same time,the   (35)Dof the language systems adds to the cultural differences.In the East,most languages belong to the pictographic (象形文字的) language while the Western languages are(36)Bbased on the Latin system,for example,the one I'm using to write this paper.
Other factors like human race difference(37)Acounts as well.However,(38)C the far distance and the steep areas between the East and West,the two cultures seldom(39)A until recent centuries.(40)D,they grew up totally in their own ways with almost no-interference(干擾) from the other.
21.A.in allB.a(chǎn)bove allC.in no caseD.on the whole
22.A.riversB.lakesC.mountainsD.plains
23.A.orB.forC.whileD.when
24.A.improvedB.developedC.createdD.protected
25.A.graduallyB.naturallyC.suddenlyD.quietly
26.A.changedB.mixedC.decidedD.forced
27.A.expandedB.interruptedC.shapedD.influenced
28.A.comesB.belongsC.a(chǎn)mountsD.a(chǎn)dds
29.A.carried outB.given outC.brought upD.picked up
30.A.baseB.signC.resultD.content
31.A.WithB.LikeC.ViaD.Except
32.A.crossedB.formedC.a(chǎn)ffectedD.spread
33.A.went upB.joined upC.settled downD.broke down
34.A.differB.sufferC.resultD.come
35.A.featureB.developmentC.a(chǎn)ppearanceD.distinction
36.A.simplyB.mostlyC.properlyD.partly
37.A.countB.reduceC.lastD.change
38.A.in terns ofB.in case ofC.due toD.a(chǎn)s to
39.A.communicateB.distinguishC.transformD.display
40.A.HoweverB.FurthermoreC.MeanwhileD.Therefore

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:選擇題

19.---Stricter laws concerning global warming have to be put into effect.
---I agree.There is a long way to go ______we can take a comfortable world for granted again.( 。
A.afterB.whenC.ifD.before

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:填空題

16.If your life feels like it is lacking the power that you want and the motivation that you need,sometimes(61)all/whatyou have to do is shift your point of view.
Your life can be enhanced,and your happiness(62)enriched(rich),when you(63)choose(choice) to change your perspective.Don't(64)leaveyour future to chance,or wait for things to get better mysteriously on their own.You must go in the direction of your hopes and aspirations.Begin to build your(65)confidence(confident),and work through problems rather than avoid them.Remember that power is not(66)necessary(necessary )to control over situations,but the(67)ability(able )to deal with whatever comes your way.
Always believe that good things are possible,and remember that mistakes can be lessons that lead to (68)discoveries(discover).Take your fear and transform it into trust;learn to rise above anxiety and doubt.Turn your"worry hours"into"productive hours".Take the energy that you have wasted and direct it toward every worthwhile effort that you can be involved in.
You will see beautiful things happen when you allow(69)yourselfto experience the joys of life.You will find happiness when you adopt positive thinking into your daily routine and make(70)itan important part of your world.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:閱讀理解

3.WASHINGTON-Thousands of public schools stopped teaching foreign languages in the last decade,according to a survey.But another contrary trend has educators and policy makers abuzz:a rush by schools in all parts of America to offer instructions in Chinese.
Some schools are paying for Chinese classes on their own,but hundreds are getting some help.The Chinese government is sending teachers from China to schools all over the world-and paying part of their salaries.
No one keeps an exact count,but rough calculations based on the government's survey suggest that perhaps 1,600 American public and private schools are teaching Chinese,up from 300 or so a decade ago.And the number is growing exponentially(成倍地).
"It's really changing the language education landscape of this country,"said Nancy C.Rhodes,director at the center.Other indicators point to the same trend."The number of students taking the Advanced Placement test in Chinese,introduced in 2007,has grown so fast that it is likely to pass German this year as the third most-tested A.P.language,after Spanish and French",said Trevor Packer,vice president at the College Board.
"We've all been surprised that in such a short time Chinese would grow to surpass A.P.German,"Mr.Packer said.
A decade ago,most of the schools with Chinese programs were on the East and West Coasts.But in recent years,many schools have started Chinese programs in heartland states,including Ohio and Illinois in the Midwest,Texas and Georgia in the South,and Colorado and Utah in the Rocky Mountain West.
America has had the study of a foreign language grow before,only to see the bubble burst.Many schools began teaching Japanese in the 1980s,after Japan emerged as an economic rival.But thousands have dropped the language,the survey found.Japanese is not the only language that has declined.Thousands of schools that offered French,German or Russian have stopped teaching those languages,too,the survey found.

25.What's the meaning of the underlined word"abuzz"in the first paragraph?C
A.Be noisy like the sound of a bee.
B.Be lively for various activities.
C.Cause people to discuss something hotly.
D.Motivate people to march bravely.
26.What can we infer from what Mr.Packer said?A
A.More and more people choose Chinese in A.P.test.
B.A.P.test is the most difficult one in the world.
C.Chinese is more important than Spanish and French.
D.Chinese is a necessary subject in most important tests.
27.What can we know from the last two paragraphs?B
A.Many schools started Chinese programs in the Midwest ten years ago.
B.Chinese programs have been started in more areas in America recently.
C.American schools have stopped teaching French,German and Russian.
D.People are gradually fond of learning Chinese and Japanese in recent years.
28.What is the main idea of the passage?B
A.Chinese is being learned as an official language in America.
B.Foreign Languages fade in American schools except Chinese.
C.Teaching Chinese in foreign countries has become a trend.
D.Foreign languages are no longer being taught in America.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:完形填空

13.I have always been an independent person,but I have come to know that being independent does  not mean refusing help.I may still be (41)Awith asking for help,but I try to accept.Furthermore,I will even (42)B help and when my offers are refused,I am (43)Dwilling to walk away.And all these changes came from a disaster on an island.
Sometimes a person's independence is a(44)Dof pride,daring,stubbornness and luck.I used to be too(45)Csince I was little.I was once a traveler who never asked for(46)C,choosing instead to struggle with maps and signs until I found my way.
Then one day on the island of Koh Phangan,in Thailand,everything(47)D.I was swimming in the ocean with Sean,my fiancé,when he was(48)Aby a box jellyfish(箱形水母).He(49)B within three minutes,25 years old.Yet when onlookers and travelers asked if I wanted (50)A,stubborn pride and force of habit(51)B me accepting.But two young Israeli women stayed.(52)Amy protest,they were with me even when the police tried to cover up the(53)D of Sean's death.It was listed as drunk drowning to avoid hurting the(54)C industry.The Israeli women (55)Dhave walked away.(56)C,without even telling me,they(57)A their schedule rather than leave me behind.
(58)BI didn't realize it at the time,I now believe I would not have(59)C the disaster without these great women.Actually,the person who needs help the most is usually the last person to ask for it.I have learned(60)Bis better than refusing because it not only helps you walk out of trouble,but also helps you know the real meaning of life.
41.A.strugglingB.dealingC.confusedD.satisfied
42.A.a(chǎn)cceptB.offerC.seekD.desire
43.A.occasionallyB.frequentlyC.usuallyD.seldom
44.A.rangeB.symbolC.wayD.mix
45.A.a(chǎn)dventurousB.braveC.independentD.creative
46.A.moneyB.equipmentC.directionsD.suggestions
47.A.happ enedB.messedC.disappearedD.cha nged
48.A.a(chǎn)ttackedB.caughtC.followedD.impressed
49.A.sunkB.diedC.failedD.recovered
50.A.companyB.a(chǎn)dviceC.comfortD.evidence
51.A.keptB.preventedC.deniedD.suggested
52.A.In spite ofB.In case ofC.In terms ofD.As a result of
53.A.proofB.newsC.factD.cause
54.A.medicineB.entertainmentC.tourismD.fishing
55.A.mustB.needC.shouldD.could
56.A.ThereforeB.OtherwiseC.InsteadD.Besides
57.A.delayedB.madeC.consideredD.threw
58.A.WhenB.WhileC.BecauseD.If
59.A.a(chǎn)voidedB.experiencedC.survivedD.suffered
60.A.refusingB.a(chǎn)cceptingC.givingD.begging

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:閱讀理解

20.Dear Amy:My children are friends with a set of siblings (兄弟姊妹).The kids enjoy spending time together,and their mother has publicly announced on social media that my husband and 1were great parents and my kids were very well behaved.
Her daughter had  a birthday    party  a couple of weeks ago.My kids spent the nigh.
My son,who is 10.had his elder brother's phone with him that night.
I guess at some point my son showed to the other children a video of me in a.drunken state.
I had no idea that the video existed-and I was completely embarrassed that my elder son had taken this video and was making fun of me in it.
I am not mad at my child for being a kid and  thinking that the video was funny,yet the mother of the other children thought it was y huge deal.
I have a tendency to overindulge (過度放縱)in alcohol at times,I admit that I am a  hard-working mother of three,and I do drink to unwind after a long day at work.But this woman has completely cut off contact with us and will not allow even our daughters to be friends any longer,
How  can   get past this emotionally for my well-being,and how do I explain to my children (hat they cm no longer hang with their best buddies?
Upset:Your claim that you drink to 44 unwindp,because you're such a hardworking and busy mom h nothing more than an excuse to paper over your drinking problem.
Start untangling (理清)this by owning your drinking problem and working hard,starting now,to do something about it.Alcoholism is a.progressive disease.You have probably spent working up to this moment.
There are a number of techniques to try,including yoga,meditation  nutrition and 12-step programmes; if you cannot control this by yourself,a counselor (顧問) could give you advice.
This other mother seems to be punishing your children because of your behaviour,but surely you understand that she would not be comfortable having her children at your house.I hope you can communicate calmly with her to work this out,so your kids can continue to be friends.
Amy
58.From the letter we can learn that Upset often drinks heavilyC.
A.to save  her energy   
B.to forget  her past
C.to escape pressure    
D.to entertain herself
59.What can the other woman's reaction suggest basically?D
A.She considers Upset and her children as unreliable.
B.She can't tolerate anyone overindulging in alcohol.
C.She sees some difference between the two families.
D.She wants to avoid a negative effect on her children
60.The advice given by Amy is concerned withB.
A.how to give children proper education
B.how to stop drinking too much alcohol
C.how to build a relationship with others
D.how to forgive others for their rudeness.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:短文改錯(cuò)

11.If it was not for the fact that she can't sing,I would invite her to the party.

查看答案和解析>>

科目:高中英語 來源: 題型:閱讀理解

12.A mouse happened to look through a hole in the wall to see the farmer and his wife open a package.."What food might this contain?"The mouse wondered.But he was sad to discover it was a mousetrap.
Back to the farmyard,the mouse announced this warning;"There is a mousetrap in the house!There is a mouse trap in the house!"
The hen clucked (咯咯地叫) and scratched,raised her head and said,"Mr.Mouse,I can tell this is a great concern to you,but it is of no consequence to me.I cannot be bothered by it."
Then the mouse turned to the pig.The pig sympathized,but said,"I am so very sorry,Mr.Mouse,but there is nothing I can do about it but pray.Be assured you are in my prayers."
Then the mouse turned to the cow and repeated the same words.The cow said,"Moo,Mr.Mouse.I'm sorry for you,but it's no skin off my nose."
So,the mouse returned to the house,head down and sadly faced the farmer's mousetrap alone.That very right a sound was heard throughout the house-the sound of a mousetrap catching its prey (獵物).The farmer's wife rushed to see what was caught.In the darkness,she did not see it.It was a poisonous snake whose tail was caught in the trap.The snake bit the farmer's wife.The farmer rushed her to the hospital.When she returned home,she still had a fever.
Everyone knows fresh chicken soup is good to treat a fever.So the farmer took his knife to the farmyard.The hen was killed.
But his wife's sickness continued.Friends and neighbors came to sit with her around the clock.To feed them,the farmer butchered the pig.
The farmer's wife did not get well but died.So many people came for her funeral that the farmer had the cow killed to provide enough meat for all of them for the lunch.
The mouse looked upon it all from his hole in the wall with great sadness.
21.What surprised the mouse when looking through the hole?B
A.The farmer and his wife.
B.A dangerous mousetrap.
C.A package with food in.
D.A poisonous snake.
22.What did the mouse do when it returned to the farmyard?B
A.He had a warn talk with his friends.
B.He warned its neighbors of the danger.
C.He argued with its neighbors loudly.
D.He tried hard to cheer its neighbors.
23.Which of the following is NOT mentioned in the story?D
A.The hen was sure that it needn't be bothered by it.
B.The pig only expressed its sympathy for the mouse.
C.The farmer's wife was bitten by the poisonous snake.
D.The farmer's neighbors came to his home for meat.
24.What does the underlined sentence"but it's no skin off my nose"in paragraph 5mean?A
A.It is none of my business.
B.It is out of the question.
C.It doesn't affect my smell.
D.It is not interesting at all.

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊(cè)答案