Question

13．電視臺播出"中國達人秀"（China's Got Talent）節(jié)目后，曾一度受到熱議，請以一名觀眾的身份給節(jié)目組寫一封信，介紹一個你心目中的達人，可以是電視節(jié)目里的選手，也可以是其他人（不要使用真實姓名）．
文章必須包括：
?你心目中的達人是一個什么樣的人
?簡單闡述你認為他或她是達人的理由．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
But my talent is around me，who gives me more love than others．She is my mother，the talent in my heart．
但我的達人就在我身邊，給予我比別人更多的愛．她是我的母親，我心里的達人．
高分句型二：
She cares much about students study and life，and she tries her best to help students in need．
她很關心學生的學習生活，并盡她最大的努力幫助有需要的學生．

解答 Dear host
When people say the word"talent"，what will you think？Do you have a talent in your heart？Maybe your talent is a famous singer，a movie star or a great-man．But my talent is around me，who gives me more love than others．She is my mother，the talent in my heart（高分句型一）．My mother isn't great in the way of a famous singer or a movie star．She does nothing big，but what she does make others inferior．From her，I learn a lot．
When I was a baby，she taught me how to walk and how to speak．When I go to school，she helps me solve many problems．She also tells me be kind to others．When I do badly in study，she encourages me and tries to cheer me up．My mother is a teacher，and she is always busy with her work．When she corrects students'homework，she is always very serious．My mother is responsible to all of her students．She cares much about students study and life，and she tries her best to help students in need（高分句型二）．
My mother is a loving mother，a qualified teacher，and a real talent in my heart．

點評 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．