13.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同學寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
Music is the international language.The songs sung or playing by instruments are beautiful to people everywhere.Popular music in America is that every student likes.Students carry small radios with earphones,but listen to music before class,after class,and at lunch.There are other kinds music that are important to Americans.One is called folk music,it tells stories about common life of Americans.Another is called western or country music,started by cowboys whom would sing to the cows they were watching out.Today,any music about the love between a country boy and his girl friend are called western or country music.

分析 音樂作為一種國際語言無處不在.本文介紹了美國的兩種音樂形式--民間音樂和鄉(xiāng)村音樂及它們不同的表現(xiàn)形式.

解答 短文改錯1.the→an    2.playing→played  3.that→what   4.but→and   5.kinds后加of  6.it→which  7.common前加the  8.whom→who  9.去掉out  10.a(chǎn)re→is
1.the→an 考查不定冠詞. international language表示泛指,要用不定冠詞,因international讀音是發(fā)元音開頭的,用an.
2.playing→played  考查過去分詞.or要連接是并列成分,sing和play與songs之間是動賓關系,要用過去分詞作定語.
3.that→what  考查代詞.like是及物動詞,缺少賓語,如用that,在表語從句中不可作賓語,what作like的賓語.
4.but→and   考查連詞.此處上下文是并列關系,而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關系.
5.kinds后加of  考查介詞.kinds of為固定搭配,意為"各種各樣的".
6.it→which  考查關系代詞.分析句子結(jié)構可知這是一個定語從句,先行詞folk music指物,要用關系代詞which.
7.common前加the  考查定冠詞.因其后有of Americans作后置定語,表示特指.
8.whom→who  考查關系代詞.分析句子結(jié)構可知這是一個定語從句,would sing to缺少主語,要用主格代詞who.
9.去掉out  考查動詞.watch out意為"當心",為不及物動詞短語,與題意不符,去掉out,watch意為"觀看;注視",是及物動詞.
10.a(chǎn)re→is 考查主謂一致.主語music是不可數(shù)名詞,謂語動詞要用單數(shù).

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文、短文故事、書信等,具有很強的實用性.短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際,從表面上看類似一篇學生習作.高考對短文改錯的考察重點集中在動詞、形容詞、副詞、介詞、連詞和代詞上,其中包括固定搭配,固定句型以及行文邏輯的考察.看到題目的時候,先通篇讀一遍,了解這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容.然后再改錯,簡單的錯誤一定要看到,這就需要基礎知識要扎實.看看時態(tài),固定結(jié)構,句子成分是否有錯.綜合運用所學語言知識,根據(jù)各行不同的錯誤情況分別進行答題(即改詞、加詞或減詞).

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