Question

下面的短文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或個(gè)性某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：在多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。
注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of Wanping, a small town by the Taihu Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon, we had picnic near the lake. Everybody was attracted with the beautiful scenery and we took a lot of picture. In the afternoon, some of them went fishing, some flew kites, and the others rowed boats on the water. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trio fir us, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others. In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.

Answer 1

解析試題分析：
【小題1】make a trip to到…地方旅行，或make a tour of
【小題2】earlier   改為early 本句只是說(shuō)我們很早就出發(fā)，沒(méi)有涉及到比較的意思。故使用原級(jí)即可。
【小題3】had visit 改為 visited 本文講述的是過(guò)去所發(fā)生的事情，所以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。
【小題4】had ^ picnic 中加 a  picnic是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，前面加a修飾。
【小題5】be attracted by被…吸引
【小題6】picture   改為 pictures 前面有a lot of修飾，如果后面的名詞是可數(shù)名詞，要使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題7】前面用的是we，這里是用us
【小題8】both  改為all  根據(jù)上文可知我們是很多人一起去的，使用使用all表示三者或三者以上。
【小題9】were 去掉      本句是主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，男孩給女孩很多幫助。
【小題10】sharing  改為share  share與動(dòng)詞understand構(gòu)成并列的關(guān)系，都使用動(dòng)詞原形。