【題目】假如你叫李華，你和父母在英國(guó)旅游期間于1月28日至30日入住Forest Hotel酒店，但對(duì)其提供的服務(wù)不滿意，請(qǐng)發(fā)電子郵件給酒店的管理者進(jìn)行投訴，要求其道歉并改進(jìn)服務(wù)質(zhì)量。

1.搬運(yùn)工送到房間的皮箱破損；

2.衛(wèi)生間漏水；

3.樓下酒吧有噪音，并持續(xù)到很晚，影響休息。

注意：

1.文章必須包括所有要點(diǎn)。可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。

2.詞數(shù)120。

3.參考詞匯：搬運(yùn)工porter n; 皮箱suitcase n； 漏水leak vi.

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【答案】Dear Manager,

My name is Li Hua. I stayed at your hotel, Forest Hotel, during my visit to the UK from Jan 28 to 30 with my parents. However, the service in your hotel left much to be desired. I’m writing this email to express my opinion.

First, we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our room by one of your porters. Second, water was leaking out of the toilet in the bathroom third, the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night each night that we couldn’t get good rest.

For the above reasons, I have to say that the service in your hotel is of poor quality. Therefore, I would like to receive a written apology from you. Meanwhile, I hope you can improve your service in the future so that none of the above happens again.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：

本文屬于提綱類短文，要求以LiHua的身份發(fā)電子郵件給Forest Hotel酒店投訴。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 你和父母在英國(guó)旅游期間于1月28日至30日入住Forest Hotel酒店，但對(duì)其提供的服務(wù)不滿意；2. 搬運(yùn)工送到房間的皮箱破損；3.衛(wèi)生間漏水；4.樓下酒吧有噪音，并持續(xù)到很晚，影響休息。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫�？忌仨氄J(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)、錯(cuò)寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇電子郵件，格式正確，布局合理，采用三段式，同時(shí)句中使用高級(jí)句子。the service in your hotel left much to be desired.動(dòng)詞不定式一般式的被動(dòng)式做后置定語(yǔ)；we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our room by one of your porters.after引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，同時(shí)主句部分包含過(guò)去分詞做賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)；the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night each night that we couldn’t get good rest.so---that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；I hope you can improve your service in the future so that none of the above happens again.賓語(yǔ)從句和so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；另外，However, First，F(xiàn)or the above reasons, Therefore,

Meanwhile,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。

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