Question

第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)（總分25分）
湯姆因在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)被學(xué)校處分，他感到很困惑，寫信給你求助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下結(jié)構(gòu)提示給湯姆回信。開頭結(jié)尾已給出。所給要點(diǎn)必須寫到外，自己可以適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)。字?jǐn)?shù)：90----100。
Paragraph 1: 手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：聯(lián)系方便（方便convenient）
Paragraph 2: 帶手機(jī)上學(xué)存在的問(wèn)題：影響教學(xué)，花大量時(shí)間打手機(jī)有害學(xué)習(xí)和健康
Your letter reached me yesterday. You said in your letter that                        
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It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones in school.

Answer 1

One possible version：
Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that you were punished for using cellphones, which puzzled you.
There is no doubt that cellphones can bring us much convenience. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever they are. Besides, the cellphone is a way to fun.
However, there are some problems with using cellphones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the class. It has been proved that often using cellphones does harm to health. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cellphones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.
As a student, he should concentrate on study. It is right for school to prevent you from using cellphones.

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