Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫(to scribble) 和亂丟垃圾(to litter) 的行為，請(qǐng)用英語給校英語報(bào)編輯寫一封信。信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 說明寫信目的；

2. 對(duì)這些行為進(jìn)行批評(píng)；

3. 提出建議。

注意：開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（本次考試開頭和信首及落款將不在答題紙上體現(xiàn)）

Dear Editor,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I’m writing to tell you that it has been alarmingly shocking to see so much scribing and littering in our school, but ironically, seemingly everyone pretends to get used to the phenomenon.

Without doubt it not only brings our school under a cloud, but also has a bad effect on students’ mind. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一封書信。假設(shè)你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫和亂丟垃圾的行為，請(qǐng)用英語給校英語報(bào)編輯寫一封信。

這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)：1. 說明寫信目的；2. 對(duì)這些行為進(jìn)行批評(píng)；3. 提出建議。

寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和短語及句子有：shocking to see so much scribing and littering，pretend to，get used to the phenomenon，without doubt， have a bad effect on，place more dustbins around，set up specific rules against such behavior，Students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.，with the joint efforts of both teachers and students，become a more enjoyable place. 可以使用的銜接詞：1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯(cuò)誤。