Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack發(fā)郵件告訴你他對中國傳統(tǒng)文化非常感興趣，但是在學(xué)習(xí)時遇到了很多困難，希望得到你的幫助。請你用英文給Jack回郵件，鼓勵他，并建議他利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)解決一些困難，同時，請教周圍的中國人也是一種很好的辦法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】I am glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese culture. It’s a good way to learn about some famous Chinese educators and thinkers. But it’s natural to meet with difficulties because even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to understand some essays. So you don’t need to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.

First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can find useful explanations and introductions which can help you to understand better. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around. Besides, I’m always ready to help you. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to learn a lot.

【解析】試題分析：

題干給出背景：你的美國朋友Jack發(fā)郵件告訴你，他對中國傳統(tǒng)文化非常感興趣，但是在學(xué)習(xí)時遇到了很多困難。文章要求給他回封郵件，鼓勵他并給他一些可操作的建議。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：(1)內(nèi)容要點齊全。 (2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點，列出提綱：第一部分：寫作背景（聽說Jack對中國傳統(tǒng)文化非常感興趣，但是在學(xué)習(xí)時遇到了很多困難，告訴他這些都是正常的）；第二段：提出可操作的建議（用First, Second， Besides使這部分流暢）+給他鼓勵。

【亮點說明】

1.使用高級句型：it作形式主語It’s a good way to learn about some famous Chinese educators and thinkers.；含有非限制性定語從句和限制性定語從句的復(fù)合句First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can find useful explanations and introductions which can help you to understand better.。2.使用了過渡詞語：First, Second， Besides 等。3.使用了重要短語：be interested in對…感興趣；meet with遇到；turn to求助；keep on繼續(xù)。