Question

10．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備英語競賽未能及時回復(fù)．請根據(jù)以下要點給他回封郵件：
1．未及時回信的原因；
2．你假期的打算（如做學(xué)游泳、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
      2 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
 Dear Tom，
      How is everything going on with you？                                          
                                                                                
 
                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                               Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 亮點說明：文章要點齊全，表達思路明確，知識點運用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿唬�文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如in time，prefer to go travelling，cultural background，broaden one's horizon，enrich one's knowledge等．還運用了現(xiàn)在完成進行時since I have been preparing for the final exam recently；to do做目的狀語not only to enjoy the delicious food，but to learn about people from a different cultural background；定語從句where I can appreciate the creations of nature and relax myself；which should not be missed to broaden my horizon as well as enriching my knowledge等．并注意了句子的銜接如：first，second，finally，all in all等．

解答 Dear Peter，
   How is everything going on with you？I'm glad to receive your email，and I am sorry I couldn't reply in time since I have been preparing for the final exam recently．In your email，you asked me about my plan of the summer holidays．If it comes to a choice，I prefer to go travelling．
  First，I would spend a couple of days in Japan not only to enjoy the delicious food，but to learn about people from a different cultural background．Second，walking through a well-known national park is another must on my list，where I can appreciate the creations of nature and relax myself．（高分句型）Finally，I would visit some museums which should not be missed to broaden my horizon as well as enriching my knowledge．（高分句型）
  All in all，travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges．（高分句型）Let's just pack our suitcases and start our trip!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                         Li Hua．

點評 本文是篇郵件應(yīng)用文，內(nèi)容提示較簡潔，只是框架，但學(xué)生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的．考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時．人稱用第一和第二人稱．根據(jù)寫作要求文章分三段來寫．第一段首先對不能及時回復(fù)郵件表示歉意并表明原因，之后提出自己的打算．第二段重點描述自己的具體計劃和想法．第三段總結(jié)全文．再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次．