Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

假設(shè)你是Tom, 是一名高一新生。請(qǐng)你給自己的初中同學(xué)Jack寫(xiě)一封信，簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的高中生活。

要點(diǎn)：

1）已經(jīng)適應(yīng)了高中的生活，并且交了好多朋友。

非常想念過(guò)去的老師和同學(xué)們；與現(xiàn)在的同學(xué)相處很好，對(duì)老師很滿意。

自己一定努力學(xué)習(xí)，為的是三年以后能夠上個(gè)好的大學(xué)。

注意：1）數(shù)80左右2）頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

Dear Jack,

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

How time flies! I have been in high school for a whole month. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many new friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in Junior Middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。請(qǐng)你給自己的初中同學(xué)Jack寫(xiě)一封信，簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的高中生活。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句和it做形式主語(yǔ)的句型，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)信類短文寫(xiě)作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：書(shū)信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。