Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

目前，不少人在寫作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場(chǎng)討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點(diǎn)。

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的觀點(diǎn)
1. 有點(diǎn)荒誕，有時(shí)讓人無法理解 2. 違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助	1. 幽默，使語言更生動(dòng) 2. 有助于表達(dá)思想	1.… 2. …

荒誕ridiculous

注意：

1. 對(duì)所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called the Web Language. Recently, our class held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use the Web Language in writing compositions or daily communication.

40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using the Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.

However, the rest of the students are fond of it. They think what they say will sound humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.

In my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use the Web Language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

【解析】

試題分析：目前，不少人在寫作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場(chǎng)討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點(diǎn)。40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：1. 有點(diǎn)荒誕，有時(shí)讓人無法理解2. 違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助。60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：1. 幽默，使語言更生動(dòng)2. 有助于表達(dá)思想。你的觀點(diǎn)：1.----；2.---。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 對(duì)所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】there came a kind of language called the Web Language句中運(yùn)用全部倒裝和過去分詞作后置定語。