假定你是李華,準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語作文比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文,主要內(nèi)容包括:

1. 樂觀的人生態(tài)度;

2. 努力學(xué)習(xí);

3. 參加體育鍛煉。

4. 重要詞匯:develop, consist of, not only…but also…, keep fit, grow up

生詞:態(tài)度attitude

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100左右(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

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We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard time. we should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy Life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit, we can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study, If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英語短文參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語作文比賽。寫作要點(diǎn)包括:樂觀的人生態(tài)度;努力學(xué)習(xí);參加體育鍛煉等三個(gè)方面。詞數(shù)在100詞左右,開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);注意使用所給詞匯;不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯誤,盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀;注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明:范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣,并注意語句的連貫性;范文還使用了原因狀語從句、條件狀語從句、目的狀語從句等語法知識,具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

語法方面:原因狀語從句because knowledge is power;條件狀語從句①If we have the power,②If we do those things well;目的狀語從句so that we can keep fit等,語法知識運(yùn)用嫻熟,顯示了較強(qiáng)的語法功底,也使作文句式變得多樣;

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面:范文注意使用firstly, secondly, in order to study well等來銜接句子和段落,使表達(dá)變得更有條理;

短語和搭配方面:范文使用了an attitude to..., consist of, not only...but also, in front of, in order to, be able to, grow up等短語和搭配,使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn):材料類作文

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