Question

你校英語論壇對是否需要安裝"綠壩——花季護(hù)航"軟件(the software Green Dam —Youth Escort)以保證學(xué)生健康上網(wǎng)一事展開了一場激烈的討論。眾說紛紜,莫衷一是,有支持,亦有反對。請結(jié)合下面列出的原因,在論壇上發(fā)貼來闡述一下你個(gè)人對此問題的看法。(詞數(shù):80-100詞)。

   支持理由

1. 安裝容易，操作簡單，便于家長監(jiān)控孩子的上網(wǎng)活動；

2. 能過濾一些黃色網(wǎng)站，幫助我們營造一個(gè)健康的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)環(huán)境。

   反對理由

1. 不能從根本上解決學(xué)生瀏覽不良網(wǎng)站的問題；

2. 國家每年為此耗資巨大；

3. 軟件本身不成熟，經(jīng)常出錯(cuò)誤。

你的觀點(diǎn)？

    參考詞匯:

安裝install；   過濾filter；     黃色網(wǎng)站porn web-site

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

There is no doubt that we should protect students from harmful websites. But we argue about whether we should install the software Green Dam —Youth Escort.

     There are two main reasons why we should install the software. First, the software is easy to install and use. It is convenient for parents to watch over their children’s net activities. Second, it can filter some porn websites, which will help us get a healthy Internet environment. However, some think it cannot protect students from all harmful websites. It costs the government too much every year. Even worse, it is not well-developed.

     As for me, I think we should install the software. It has more advantages than disadvantages.

【解析】

該篇書面表達(dá)要求明確就是否需要安裝"綠壩——花季護(hù)航"軟件(the software Green Dam —Youth Escort)以保證學(xué)生健康上網(wǎng)一事表明自己的觀點(diǎn)并將支持與反對者的理由表述清楚。難點(diǎn)：1、中文上習(xí)慣應(yīng)用四字短語“安裝容易”“操作簡單”“耗資巨大”，如何正確處理。2、分析中文前后兩個(gè)小分句的關(guān)系對于在英語上采用何種從句會有很大的幫助。像“能過濾一些黃色網(wǎng)站，幫助我們營造一個(gè)健康的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)環(huán)境�！�3、還應(yīng)注意使用過渡性詞語，進(jìn)而使文章條理清楚，過渡自然。4、恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂谜n本所學(xué)短語可以使文章增色不少。

考查點(diǎn)：提綱作文

【亮點(diǎn)說明】1、It can filter some porn websites, which will help us get a healthy Internet environment.借助定語從句，體現(xiàn)出作者較高級的語法功底及語言分析能力。2、The software is easy to install and use.借助不定式做表語形容詞的狀語用法，巧妙解決中文四字短語的問題3、較高級的詞匯或短語watch over、net activities、However、protect…from…、convenient（主語不能是人）