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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

I was walking home late at night since I heard someone walking behind me. I looked back, but it was too darkness to see clearly. As soon as I heard the footsteps, so I started to feel nervous. Just then, I could hear a person behind me walking faster. I began to run and noticed a woman carried a bag was walking slowly in front of me. The moment I began to run, she did nothing but threw her bag, screaming. Then she turned to face me a look of terror on her face. When I saw this, I stopped running and tried to smile at them. At that moment, the person that footsteps had frightened me walked by, looking curiously at all of us.

Answer 1

【答案】1.since-when

2.darkness-dark

3.去so

4.a-the

5.carried- carrying/woman后加who/that

6.threw- throw

7.a look前加with

8.them-her

9.that-whose

10.all-both

【解析】文章主要講述了一場誤會。深夜作者走在路上被身后的腳步聲嚇到了，他便加快了腳步，沒想到嚇到了走在他前面的女士。

1.考查固定句型。句意：深夜我走在回家的路上時(shí)，我聽到有人走在我后面。根據(jù)“be doing when”正在做…突然。故將since改為when。

2.考查形容詞。句意：但它太黑，看不清楚。根據(jù)“too…to”結(jié)構(gòu)中too修飾形容詞或副詞，故將名詞darkness改為dark。

3.考查連詞。句意：一聽到腳步聲就很緊張。As soon as一…就，引導(dǎo)狀語從句，故將主句中的so去掉。

4.考查冠詞。句意：我聽到我身后的人走得更快了。behind me作定語修飾person，故將不定冠詞a改為定冠詞the表特指。

5.考查動名詞作定語/定語從句。句意：我開始跑了，注意到一個提著包的女人在我前面慢慢地走著。Woman與動詞carry之間處于主動關(guān)系，應(yīng)為現(xiàn)在分詞作定語，故將carried改為carrying；或在woman后添加關(guān)系詞who/that引導(dǎo)定語從句。

6.考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：我一開始跑，她就什么都沒做除了尖叫著扔了她的包。文章描述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，故將threw改為throw。

7.考查介詞。句意：然后她轉(zhuǎn)身面對我，一臉驚恐的表情。With a look of terror驚恐的表情，做伴隨狀語。故填加介詞with。

8.考查考查代詞。句意：當(dāng)我看到這，我停了下來，試著向她微笑。根據(jù)“Then she turned to face me with a look of terror on her face.” 后她轉(zhuǎn)身面對我，一臉驚恐的表情。可知，故將them改為her。

9.考查定語從句中代詞的使用。句意：那一刻，那個腳步嚇著我的人走過來，好奇地看著我們兩個。定語從句中修飾名詞footsteps應(yīng)使用形容詞性關(guān)系詞whose。

10.考查代詞。句意：那一刻，那個腳步嚇著我的人走過來，好奇地看著我們兩個。All三個或三個以上，both指兩個人。故將all改為both。