Question

19．利用所學(xué)知識，完成下面的小作文
1．我的朋友李明，經(jīng)常為一些小事而心煩不能冷靜．同學(xué)們都很厭煩他，不理睬他
（be upset about，keep calm，get/be tired of，ignore）
2．老師們很關(guān)心他，多次和他進行了面對面地交談．但所有的努力都是白費力氣
（ be concerned about，face to face）
3．一天黃昏時刻，他突然肚子疼．老師和同學(xué)們立刻把他送到醫(yī)院并在那兒照顧
他 （at dusk，suffer from）
4．康復(fù)之后，他非常感激老師和同學(xué)們．（ recover，be grateful to ）
5．他再也不擾亂同學(xué)們了，并經(jīng)常加入到他們當(dāng)中來解決一些問題
（ join…in…，settle）
6．他和同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在相處得很好 （get along with）
7．在我看來，正是老師和同學(xué)們的愛和關(guān)心完全地改變了他
（ as far as sb is concerned，it is…that，entirely ）
注意：．字?jǐn)?shù)：100～120詞左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and took care of him
高分句型二：
As far as I'm concerned，it's the love and care from the teachers and his classmates that has changed him entirely
句型一 The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and took care of him 該句中使用到了二個重要的短語：send sb to sp送某人去某地  take care of 照顧
句型二  that has changed him entirely 該句是一個由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that在句中作主語，替代前面的先行詞love and care
此外，該文章中還有以下重要短語和詞匯：
be concerned about 對．．關(guān)心   suffer from 遭受．． as far as sb be concerned 就．．看來
重要句型和重點短語的結(jié)合使用，使得文章表達(dá)更有層次，表達(dá)更為準(zhǔn)確

解答 My friend Li Ming is always upset about some small things and couldn't keep calm．His classmates are tired of him and ignorehim．Teachers are concerned about him and often talk with him face to face，however，all the efforts are in vain．
  One day at dusk，he suffered from a stomachache．The teachers and students sent him to hospital without delay and took care of him．（高分句型一）After he recovered，he was grateful to the teachers and classmates．From then on，he no longer disturbs his classmates and often joins them in settling some problems．He is getting along well with his classmates now．（情況描述）
  As far as I'm concerned，it's the love and care from the teachers and his classmates that has changed him entirely．（高分句型二）（感受）

點評 該書面表達(dá)為讀寫任務(wù)型作文，該篇作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．