Question

18．請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章．
1．If you had billions of dollars，would you donate almost all of it to charity？Well that's what Mark Zuckerberg，CEO and founder of Facebook，just said he would do．Zuckerberg and his wife Priscilla Chan promised to give 99percent of their Facebook shares to society throughout their lifetime．Right now that is about $45billion （289billion yuan），and they plan to donate the money to things like science and education．
Many billionaires in the West have done similar things．Bill Gates，creator of Microsoft，made The Giving Pledge，which is where billionaires promise to gradually give away more than half of their wealth to charities．
2．China's first Charity Law was passed on March 16，2016，with lawmakers hoping it can give donors confidence that they are helping the people who really need help．The new law，which will take effect in September，makes it easier for charity groups to raise money and carry out their activities
"Charitable programs are indispensable for the fight against poverty．Formulating a charity law helps nongovernmental sources work together in taking targeted measures to eliminate poverty and contribute to achieving the goal of building a moderately prosperous society，"said Li Jianguo，vice chairman of the National People's Congress （NPC） Standing Committee．
3．"Charity"，which means providing aids to needy people，is becoming a popular word in China as the country struggles to reduce the gap between rich and poor．
Total donations to the Chinese government and registered charities  （2011-2015）
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．用約120個詞就慈善捐助談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：
（1）慈善捐助對受惠人群會有哪些影響；
（2）你最想加入的慈善組織是哪一類（助學(xué)、濟貧、關(guān)愛殘疾人、…），理由是什么．
【寫作要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標題．
【評分標準】
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life，which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others．
高分句型二：
But when the scandal was disclosed，not only did the company have to close down，but also some officials concerned were sent to prison．
句型一 ①It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life 該句是一個由it作形式主語的主語從句，真正的主語為that后面引導(dǎo)的從句 ②which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others．該句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的費限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的整個主句的內(nèi)容
句型二 not only did the company have to close down，but also some officials concerned were sent to prison． 該句使用了固定短語：not only…but also 不但．．而且  當not only位于句首后面跟從句時，句子要使用部分倒裝，即將主語同位于部分的助動詞進行位置的交換，did the company have to close down
but also后的句子用陳書句語序
此外，該文章中還有以下重要短語和詞匯：
play an important role in 在．．中起到重要作用  contribute..to 作貢獻
重要句型和重點短語的結(jié)合使用，使得文章表達更有層次，表達更為準確

解答 It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life，which can contribute to our success and earn us respect from others．（高分句型一）Therefore，honesty is of vital importance and bring people benefits．Dishonesty may bring people short-term benefits．But actually，it will cost them friendship，love，social status or even life．Dishonesty destroys the harmonious relationship between people．What's worse，it even becomes a barrier of the moral development in society．San Lu Milk Powder Company made a lot of money by dishonest means．But when the scandal was disclosed，not only did the company have to close down，but also some officials concerned were sent to prison．（高分句型二）Personally，we should keep in mind that honesty is the best policy．We should try our best to avoid dishonesty．Only in this way can we trust each other and have a harmonious society．

點評 該書面表達為讀寫任務(wù)型作文，該篇作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．