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第二節(jié):書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿(mǎn)分20分)
你在與外國(guó)友人的交流中得知，中國(guó)民工學(xué)校狀況在國(guó)外的媒體上已受到關(guān)注。于是，你與你的同學(xué)共同對(duì)你所在城市的民工學(xué)校進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查。之后，你寫(xiě)信給“21世紀(jì)中學(xué)生英文報(bào)”，呼吁全社會(huì)關(guān)注民工學(xué)校，幫助民工子弟。
信的主要內(nèi)容包括如下幾點(diǎn)：
1 民工學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀: a. 設(shè)施簡(jiǎn)陋；b. 師資缺乏；c. 民工子弟熱愛(ài)學(xué)習(xí)；
2 調(diào)查引發(fā)的感受；
3 改善民工學(xué)�，F(xiàn)狀的建議（至少2條）。
要求： 100 詞左右。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。           
參考詞匯：民工學(xué)校  migrant school 民工子弟 migrant kids
Dear editor,
We have done some research about migrant schools in our city lately and we are
shocked to see the environment of the schools is so poor. ________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

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Dear editor,
We have done some research about migrant schools in our city lately and we are shocked to see the environment of the schools is so poor. The schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no library, and even not enough teachers. All those problems are due to one key point—the lack of money, which, therefore, leads to a huge difference in education even for kids in the same city.
And yet, the good thing we saw is that migrant kids are just as keen on study as us. Can we do something to help them? Yes. Our government can pour more money into migrant schools; our community resources can be made use of; city students collect money or do book donations to them. There are a lot more things we can do.
I do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids. If everybody contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity.
Yours
Lihua

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