Question

15．最近，你班就"90后的成長"話題進(jìn)行了一項社會調(diào)查，調(diào)查顯示，人們對"90后"青少年的現(xiàn)狀褒貶不一．請根據(jù)以下要點用英語寫一篇文章，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀阕约鹤鳛橐幻?90后"的感想．
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65% 認(rèn)為	35% 認(rèn)為	你自己的感想
1．自信； 2．樂于接受并嘗試新事物； 3．珍惜友情，善于交流．	1．依賴性強； 2．缺乏責(zé)任感．	談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?/TD>

Recently our class has conducted a survey about"The growth of post-90's generation"．People have different opinions on it．______________________________________．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
What's more，they have many new ideas，which makes them more creative．
更重要的是，他們有很多新的想法，這使得他們更具創(chuàng)造性．
高分句型二：
As a member of them，I think we post-90's generation should be aware of our own strengths and weaknesses，so that we can put emphasis on perfecting ourselves．
作為其中的一員，我想我們90后的一代應(yīng)該了解自己的長處和短處，使我們可以把重點放在完善自己．

解答 Recently our class has conducted a survey about"The growth of post-90's generation"．People have different opinions on it．
      Some people think that the post-90's generation are confident，ambitious and independent in thinking．They are fond of new things，ready to accept and try them．What's more，they have many new ideas，which makes them more creative（高分句型一）．It's especially worth mentioning that they are enthusiastic and caring．They treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others．
      However，others argue that the post-90's generation are too self-centered and dependent on their parents in life or teachers in study．They tend to live a comfortable life but are less able to overcome frustration．Besides，some of them lack the sense of responsibility and don't know how to show gratitude to others．Worse still，many are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet．
      As a member of them，I think we post-90's generation should be aware of our own strengths and weaknesses，so that we can put emphasis on perfecting ourselves（高分句型二）．Only in this way can we gain respect and faith from others．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．