Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I still remember what happened to my deskmate and me in Grade One. She did well in math tests, which I often laughed at. At last it aroused her anger but she decided to turn her back on me. As the result, I was refused when I needed her help. My friends began to play fun of me about it. Feeling ashamed, I asked her for forgiveness for what I had done wrongly and promised not to do. She agreed to make friends with me again. And from then on I get along well with my friends, keeping the lesson in mind.

With an old saying goes, ＂Do to others as you would have them to do to you.＂ My experience tells me that only when we respect others can we gain other’s respect.

Answer 1

【答案】

I still remember what happened to my deskmate and me in Grade One. She did in math tests, which I often laughed at. At last it aroused her anger she decided to turn her back on me. As result, I was refused when I needed her help. My friends began to fun of me about it. Feeling ashamed, I asked her for forgiveness for what I had done and promised not to do. She agreed to make friends with me again. And from then on I along well with my friends, keeping the lesson in mind.

an old saying goes, ＂Do to others as you would have them to do to you.＂ My experience tells me that only when we respect others can we gain respect.

【解析】

第一處：此處是說她數(shù)學(xué)考得不好，應(yīng)該用副詞poorly修飾動詞did，故把well改為poorly。

第二處：此處表示順承而不是轉(zhuǎn)折，故把but改為and。

第三處：as a result表示＂結(jié)果＂，故把the改為a。

第四處：make fun of表示＂嘲笑＂，故把play改為make。

第五處：wrong的副詞形式就是wrong，表示＂錯誤地＂，故把wrongly改為wrong。

第六處：此處是說不再這么做，故在do后面加so。

第七處：講的是發(fā)生在過去的事情，應(yīng)該用一般過去時，故把get改為got。

第八處：as a saying goes表示＂俗語道＂，故把With改為As。

第九處： have sb do sth表示＂讓某人做某事＂，故把do前面的to去掉。

第十處：others’表示＂他人的＂，故把other’ s改為others’。