Question

7．Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world．Since babies do not come with child raising manuals（指南），couples，especially future mothers，have to learn from their mothers，aunts，mothers-in-law，or any other relative who is close to them．
As children grow up，parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children，advise them，punish them，lead them to achievements，and teach them．Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately．For example，they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect to their relatives．I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way．Children must know those kinds of attitudes are not good at all．
There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job，for example，the culture in which they live，the economic situation in their society，and the religious environment．
One group consists of people who don't have economical resources or education．In this group，people get married when they are teenagers．Their Children are taken to their grandparents'homes，so the job of child raising is done by grandparents instead of the real parents．If the grandparents are on the sidewalks selling newspapers，cigarettes，or magazines，the children will be like them，too．Some of them even end u being wallet thieves，gang members and drug users．
Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated．The children grow up in their parents'homes and are disciplined and punished differently．They learn to respect other people，and they are led to achieve in school，sports and communityservice．When they grow up，they often become political leaders，community leaders，and professionals in their fields．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于讀寫任務(wù)類作文，根據(jù)英語短文內(nèi)容，進(jìn)行概括總結(jié)，寫作時(shí)注意語言要精練，能夠準(zhǔn)確概括文章大意，并使用好恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞，注意句子間的邏輯關(guān)系，恰當(dāng)使用時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)，注意主謂一致等．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，要點(diǎn)齊全：There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children．（要點(diǎn)3）句子使用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句
To make it clear，two different examples are given，which reveal that different family backgrounds and educational methods can surely produce different effects．（要點(diǎn)4）句中To make it clear屬于不定式作目的狀語，which引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語從句

解答 Child raising is a tough job for couples，especially for future mothers．（要點(diǎn)1）Parents should try every means to educate their children to behave well．（要點(diǎn)2）There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children．（要點(diǎn)3）To make it clear，two different examples are given，which reveal that different family backgrounds and educational methods can surely produce different effects．（要點(diǎn)4）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．