【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文,并按要求以O(shè)ur Life Rests on Our Choice為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

Life is a matter of choice. Seemingly, it means a choice of concrete (具體的) things. But in fact, it means choosing a way of life. Life is to be lived and enjoyed, not to be wasted or complained about.

Hardly can we forget the time when our society faced the threat from the life-and death disease --- SARS. Yet, even during those dreadful times, some suffering people remained optimistic. Instead of wearing white masks, some people turned to color1 ful ones, and thus displayed a happy mood. And some creative people dubbed SARS to mean “SMILE AND REMAIN SMILING.” People who survive these kinds of circumstances decide in their minds to carry on in spite of the hardships.

Although we cannot choose our appearance, inborn gifts and even avoid unexpected disasters and adversities (逆境), we do have the right to choose to live optimistically, to love our lives, to have dreams, and to cherish hopes.

Every morning when we get up, we have a choice of how we want to approach life that day.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文的概要;

2. 用約120個(gè)詞就“Our Life Rests on Our Choice” 談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺,?nèi)容包括:

(1)簡(jiǎn)要敘述你對(duì)“Our Life Rests on Our Choice”的理解;

(2)請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明你會(huì)選擇怎樣的人生態(tài)度;

(3)簡(jiǎn)要敘述你這樣選擇的理由。(至少2點(diǎn))

1.闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí),不能直接飲用原文語(yǔ)句;

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,語(yǔ)篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

【答案】

Our Life Rests on Our Choice

Faced with disasters and adversities, some people choose to stay optimistic and determine to carry on regardless of the hardships. Life, to some extent, rests on our choice.

Life is full of ups and downs. When the time comes for us to make choices, we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude. A positive attitude somehow resembles the sail of a ship, which offers us the right direction.

As a teenager, it is of great significance to take a positive attitude towards life. To stay energetic, I will stick to an exercise schedule. I will also keep myself informed of the current events and communicate more with others, becoming socially connected.

All these mentioned above will be beneficial for me to grow into an optimistic and confident young man. Only by doing so can I fit in society more easily and stay motivated towards a better life.

解析

本作文是一篇總結(jié)材料并且結(jié)合題目所給要點(diǎn)的議論文,主要觀點(diǎn)是人們的選擇會(huì)影響人們的生活。題目中所給的材料文章主要講述的是面對(duì)困難一些人選擇積極樂(lè)觀的態(tài)度,即使再艱辛也選擇繼續(xù)前行。文中首先根據(jù)題目要求對(duì)所給材料進(jìn)行了簡(jiǎn)單的總結(jié),然后提出了自己的觀點(diǎn),Life, to some extent, rests on our choice.表示生活在某種程度上取決于我們的選擇。然后根據(jù)題目中所給體感信息結(jié)合自己的實(shí)例進(jìn)行分點(diǎn)闡述。文章結(jié)構(gòu)鮮明簡(jiǎn)單明了,主要觀點(diǎn)明確

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文中出現(xiàn)了很多值得參考借鑒的好句子,比如:Life, to some extent, rests on our choice,采用插入語(yǔ)的形式是簡(jiǎn)單的句子變得具有深意,增添了幾分靈動(dòng)性。When the time comes for us to make choices, we should be aware of the importance of a positive attitude,時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用是句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加連貫性。還有很多較具有參考價(jià)值的句子。同時(shí)文中也運(yùn)用了大量的好詞匯好詞組,比如:To stay energeticis full of ups and downs,significance,等等的很多好詞好句。是文章更加具有結(jié)構(gòu)性并且美化升級(jí)了文章內(nèi)容。

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