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17．假如你是李華，今年將要參加高考．你的老師和父母對你大學專業(yè)的選擇提出異議，為此你很苦惱．請你根據(jù)提示，用英語給你的美國筆友Bob寫一封郵件，談談你的想法，并征求筆友的建議．
1．父母的建議：法律專業(yè)（就業(yè)前景好）；
老師的建議：外語（充分發(fā)揮自己的語言天賦）；
你的想法：…
2．注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3）信的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Bob，
I am at a loss nowadays．
My teacher and my parents have different opinions about my major in college．On the one hand，my parents say I should choose law as my major，who think that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation．（高分句型一）On the other hand，my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language，which will dig out my potential better．（高分句型二）Compared to their opinions，I am ready to major in finance because I feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business，let alone make more money．（高分句型三）
What should I do？
I am looking forward to your advice．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，今年將要參加高考．你的老師和父母對你大學專業(yè)的選擇提出異議，為此你很苦惱．請你根據(jù)提示，用英語給你的美國筆友Bob寫一封郵件，談談你的想法，并征求筆友的建議．寫作時注意以下幾點：仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：父母的建議：法律專業(yè)（就業(yè)前景好）；老師的建議：外語（充分發(fā)揮自己的語言天賦）；你的想法    2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：On the one hand一方面；in great need of 急需；On the other hand另一方面；have the gift for 有…的天賦；Compared to與…相比；let alone更不用說；
On the one hand，my parents say I should choose law as my major，who think that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation．（高分句型一）
On the other hand，my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language，which will dig out my potential better．（高分句型二）
Compared to their opinions，I am ready to major in finance because I feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business，let alone make more money．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bob，
       I am at a loss nowadays． My teacher and my parents have different opinions about my major in college．On the one hand，my parents say I should choose law as my major，who think that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law and I will find a good job after graduation．（高分句型一）On the other hand，my teacher thinks I should specialize in a foreign language because I have the gift for learning and applying language，which will dig out my potential better．（高分句型二）Compared to their opinions，I am ready to major in finance because I feel that it will prepare me for a career in the world of business，let alone make more money．（高分句型三）
     What should I do？
     I am looking forward to your advice．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．