Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

注意

1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分

I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend. I had been looking forward to go there for a long time. It is one of the modernist city in the world. There have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can’t learn it in school. I’d also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Unfortunately, the twin towers destroyed on September 11th, 2001 and I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.

Answer 1

1.are 改成 am

2.had改成have

3.go改成going

4.city改成cities

5.have改成are

6.去掉it

7.towers∧destroyed中間加were

8.此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折“否則”，“遺憾的是，這對塔被毀掉了，否則我就會有機(jī)會獨(dú)自去看它們的”，故把a(bǔ)nd改成or。

9.excited改成exciting

10.unforgettable 是元音開頭，所以把a(bǔ)改成an。

【解析】

1.1】根據(jù)主謂一致的原則，此處應(yīng)該和I保持一致，故把a(bǔ)re 改成 am。

2.2】根據(jù)句意此處應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時態(tài)“很長時間我一直期盼著去那里”，故把had改成have。

3.3】looking forward to 中的to 是介詞，故把go改成going。

4.4】根據(jù)句意“它是世界上最現(xiàn)代化的城市之一”，所以此處的city應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把city改成cities。

5.5】此處是there be句型，“也有許多博物館’”，故把have改成are。

6.6】something是先行詞，后面是一個定語從句，it指代的就是something，在定語從句中是多余的，故去掉it。

7.7】這里是被動語態(tài)“這對塔被毀掉了”，主語是復(fù)數(shù)，所以在towers和destroyed中間加were。

8.8】 and改成or

9.9】這里表達(dá)的是“令人興奮的旅行”，所以把excited改成exciting。

10.10】a改成an

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯。