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【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Edward正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，希望你推薦一個(gè)適合他學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的網(wǎng)站。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給他回復(fù)郵件。
推薦網(wǎng)站：www.edchinese.com
網(wǎng)站內(nèi)容：
1). 網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程：中文情景對(duì)話、中國(guó)風(fēng)俗、成語(yǔ)；
2). 其它：中文電影、中文歌曲、唐詩(shī)等；
3). 有在線教師答疑解惑。
費(fèi)用：全部免費(fèi)
注意： 1). 詞數(shù)100左右;
2). 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Edward,
I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I'd like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.
Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Through these courses, you will have a good understanding of the Chinese language as well as its culture. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.
I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.
Wish you a happy learning time!
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱作文，內(nèi)容是推薦英國(guó)朋友一個(gè)適合他學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的網(wǎng)站。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。4.注意郵件格式。