Question

【題目】假定你是李華，是學(xué)校英文報(bào)“Advice”欄目的編輯。你收到一封署名為Miss Worried的來信。信中該同學(xué)訴說了自己的困擾：本學(xué)期期中考試后經(jīng)常感到壓力大晚上睡不好，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示理解并給予安慰；

2. 提出建議并說明理由。（至少兩條建議）

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

Dear Miss Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty falling asleep.

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I hope you’ll find them useful.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty falling asleep. The truth is that everyone will face great pressure when entering high school, so you don’t have to worry so much. Here are three tips.

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of sharing your feelings and getting support. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. And third, work out a schedule and follow it. This way, you can make good use of your time.

I hope you’ll find them useful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，是學(xué)校英文報(bào)“Advice”欄目的編輯。你收到一封署名為Miss Worried的來信。信中該同學(xué)訴說了自己的困擾：本學(xué)期期中考試后經(jīng)常感到壓力大晚上睡不好，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 表示理解并給予安慰；2. 提出建議并說明理由。（至少兩條建議）。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：have difficulty(in) doing sth.(做某事有困難)；pressure(壓力)；get support (得到支持)；physical exercise(身體鍛煉)；effective(有效的)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。