Question

有些青少年為了顯得更酷或更成熟而染上吸煙的壞習(xí)慣。針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，并為配合英語(yǔ)教學(xué)，你校決定舉辦一次英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，宣傳吸煙的危害，倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們遠(yuǎn)離香煙。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文。
要點(diǎn)如下：1. 損害心肺，易致癌；
      2. 氣味難聞；影響他人健康；
      3. 一旦上癮，很難戒掉。
注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。
2. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
There are many adolescents who smoke.They think they look cool or appear more grown-up while smoking.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
There are many adolescents who smoke. They think they look cool or appear more grown-up while smoking.
In fact, smoking is a bad habit. If you smoke, it has bad effects on your health. It does harm to your heart and lungs, which might eventually lead to cancer. Cigarette smoke also affects the health of non-smokers. Besides, your breath and even clothes smell terrible. Further more, once you become addicted to smoking, it is really hard to quit.
So, for the benefit of yourself and others, do not get into the bad habit of smoking.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生宣傳吸煙的危害，倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們遠(yuǎn)離香煙。 議論文文體一般用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意增加細(xì)節(jié)，使前后句有恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯�，還要盡量用高中階段學(xué)習(xí)詞匯和句型。注意長(zhǎng)短句搭配。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)明確，思路清晰。把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)都涵蓋了。同時(shí)注意應(yīng)用較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如in fact，have bad effects on，do harm to，lead to, become addicted to, which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：besides，further more , so等等。