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10．假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀．請你用英語寫一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報編輯反映該問題．信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：焦慮癥狀頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好等1）考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計劃2）睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠．
注意：1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．
詞數(shù)：100左右．開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：頭暈-dizzy （adj．）
Dear editor，
I'm Li Ming of Senior Three，Guangming Middle School．I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．
                  ．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文對考生的要求較高，要求考生首先讀懂原文，再根據(jù)文字提示寫作．寫信的要點(diǎn)都隱含在信中，再讀懂文章的基礎(chǔ)上，要考生自己歸納出來，再一一進(jìn)行解決，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成文，也要注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)母呒壘湫腿缍ㄕZ從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等讓文章不顯得那么平淡，而有文采．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語suffer from遭受；have an effect on 對…有影響；First of all首先；get rid of擺脫；First of all，it's important for us to make careful plans for every exam．這個句子it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed，which might help us have a sound sleep這個句子運(yùn)用到which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；
Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam．（高分句型一）
We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed，which might help us have a sound sleep．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear editor，
      I am Li Ming of Senior Three，Guangming Middle School．I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam．（高分句型一）Some will feel dizzy or tired，and some will suffer from lack of sleep．In fact，all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we have to get rid of them．
       First of all，it's important for us to make careful plans for every exam．In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams．We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed，which might help us have a sound sleep．（高分句型二）Besides，enough rest can make us energetic and perform well in an exam．
       Finally，I hope everybody can do a good job in each exam．
                                                       
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．