Question

在緊張的高三備考階段，英語老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見。假如你叫張華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給英語老師寫封信，表達你們的需求和建議。

    a)適當(dāng)放慢進度，留出思考時間

    b)反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯知識點

    c)指導(dǎo)方法

    d)減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量　 　　　

    e)給予更多鼓勵

    注意：

    1．根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。

    2．要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；

    3．詞數(shù)：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。

    Dear Mr．Wang，

We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．

                                                                           　　

                                                                           　　

                                                                           　　

                                                                           　　

                                                                           　　

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Answer 1

Dear Mr．Wang，

　　　　    We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views．　 　　　

    In the course of the general revision，what we need is solid foundation．As you know, we didn't learn well enough in the first two years，so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered everything．Besides，we need a little more time to think for ourselves．As for those important points which also make us confused，would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile，we need your instruction，for example，in how to write in natural English．I still have another request：assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently．    　　　　

    By the way, we often feel frustrated，which has a very bad effect on our study．We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．

                                                 Yours

解析:

向老師表達學(xué)習(xí)五點建議：a)適當(dāng)放慢進度，留出思考時間； b)反復(fù)訓(xùn)練重要、易錯知識點；c)指導(dǎo)方法；d)減少作業(yè)量以保證質(zhì)量；e)給予更多鼓勵，此題材學(xué)生熟悉，有話可說。注意：用熟悉的短語、句型和過渡。