Question

每位同學都希望自己具有良好的人際關系，成為班級中受歡迎的人。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文，參加學校網(wǎng)站英語論壇的討論。

受人喜愛的 個性品質	對待集體	熱心班級活動，具有團隊精神，工作負責
對待他人	尊重、關心他人，富有同情心，……
對待自己	（請考生自己擬定內(nèi)容，列舉至少兩點）……

注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；

2．短文標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；  3．詞數(shù)：120左右。

Being a popular student

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers_________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities．We should be responsible for the work and keep teamwork spirit in mind.

To be a popular student, we must show our respect, concern and sympathy for others．As a result, we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need.

To be a popular student, we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, being good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on．In time of success we remain modest, while in time of difficulity we keep strong-minded.

All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于議論文體，提出一個主題，對這個主題展開討論。對于這類文體宜采用三段式文章，第一段首先對從對待集體方面的態(tài)度和做法進行說明；第二段從對待他人的態(tài)度方面著手，結合文章的提示，進行說明；第三段通過對待自己的態(tài)度來對如何受歡迎陳述自己是如何做的，中間需要運用上表起承轉合的連詞、定語從句、倒裝等語法現(xiàn)象使文章富有深度、句式多變。

考點：議論文

點評：書面表達是最能體現(xiàn)一個學生的語言運用能力和英語思維理解的題目，議論文的寫作是比較容易的文體，提高作文無外乎平時多練習，在練習過程中，對于寫錯或是不知道表達的一定要多問老師，同時還應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。