Question

某互聯(lián)網(wǎng)消費(fèi)調(diào)研中心對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格1所給信息描述人們選擇網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的不同原因，并針對(duì)表格2中任意一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況談?wù)勀愕目捶?。
注意：1 詞數(shù)120左右
2 文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
表格一 (網(wǎng)購(gòu)最吸引用戶的方面)

40%	商品種類豐富
33%	商品價(jià)格實(shí)惠
25%	不受時(shí)間地域限制
5%	結(jié)交新朋友

表格二 （網(wǎng)購(gòu)用戶最擔(dān)心的方面）

55%	質(zhì)量問題
27%	售后服務(wù)
18%	交易安全

Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.
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Answer 1

Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows.
Chart 1 shows the reasons why people choose to shop online. Of all the people surveyed, 49%think that there are many varieties of products in online shops. About one third of them say that reasonable price is the most appealing factor. And 25% hold that online shopping is so convinient that consumers can buy what they want anywhere at any time. Interestingly, 5%of teh people even mention that they can make new friends through online shopping.
However, many consumers also express their concerns about online shopping. Among all the concerns in Chart 2, the quality of the products, which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention. Personally, I agree that what consumers get from online shops sometimes differs from what can be seen in the picture, which can be very disappointing. Therefore, we should make sure teh product is of good quality before making a purchase.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。某互聯(lián)網(wǎng)消費(fèi)調(diào)研中心對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格1所給信息描述人們選擇網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的不同原因，并針對(duì)表格2中任意一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況談?wù)勀愕目捶�。首先要看懂圖表所有表達(dá)的意思，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)以表格形式粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Of all the people surveyed, 49%think that there are many varieties of products in online shops.這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；About one third of them say that reasonable price is the most appealing factor.這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。