Question

Write an English composition in 120～150 words according to the picture and direction given.
近年來學習英語熱持續(xù)升溫，許多幼兒園開設了英語課。然而，許多專家認為孩子不宜過早學習外語，應該先學好中文，請就幼兒園是否應該開設英語課談談你的看法并說明理由。

Answer 1

In recent years, because of the phenomenon that more and more people want to learn English, and English is popular among many people, a lot of kindergardens  provide English classes for children.
However, the view some experts hold is that it’s inappropriate for kids to learn English too early. First of all, they should have a good knowledge of Chinese, which is their mother tongue.
In my opinion, whether English classes should be included in kindergardens remains to be seen. As children, they should have a happy childhood. We shouln’t put too much pressure on them. Just return happiness to children.

解析這篇書面表達是根據(jù)話題寫作，話題是：近年來學習英語熱持續(xù)升溫，許多幼兒園開設了英語課的問題，這也是第一段的內容。第二段寫許多專家的觀點。第三段按要求寫作者自己的觀點，要有理有據(jù)。文章層次分明，句型多樣：because of the phenomenon that more and more people want to learn English, and English is popular among many people, 這是同位語從句，However, the view that some experts hold is it’s inappropriate for kids to learn English too early.這是表語從句 whether English classes should be included in kindergardens remains to be seen.這是主語從句。