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13．假如你是李華，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到考試都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀，請你用英語給某學(xué)生英文報(bào)編輯寫一封信反映該問題，并提出自己的建議．信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：
焦慮癥狀：頭暈，乏力，睡眠不好，食欲不振等．
建議：1．考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃．
2．考試期間正常作息．
3、睡前洗熱水澡，喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是討論考試焦慮癥的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明寫信目的；二描述學(xué)生遇到考試出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀；三自己的建議．
高分句型：
1．In fact，all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them．句子里
have terrible effects on 表示"對…有糟糕的影響"；are eager to 表示"渴望做"；get rid of 表示"擺脫"．
實(shí)際上，所有的這些癥狀都會對我們的考試產(chǎn)生負(fù)面的影響，我們渴望擺脫這些癥狀．
2．They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies，so there is no need to worry too much about the results．句子里 a means of 表示"做…一種方式"；getting along with 表示"某事進(jìn)展怎樣"；there is no need to 表示"做某事沒有必要"．
考試只是檢查我們學(xué)習(xí)情況的一種方式，因此沒有必要為考試結(jié)果擔(dān)心太多．

解答 Dear editor，
       I'm Li Ming of Senior Three，Guangming Middle School．I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．（點(diǎn)明寫信目的）
       Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam．Some will feel dizzy or tired，some will suffer from lack of sleep，and some will lose their appetite．In fact，all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them．【高分句型一】（描述學(xué)生遇到考試出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀）
       First of all，in my opinion，it's important for us to have a positive attitude towards exams．They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies，so there is no need to worry too much about the results．【高分句型二】Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam．In this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams．Besides，enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam．Therefore，during the period of exams，we should not stay up too late．We can also try a warm bath or a cup of  warm milk before going to bed．They might help us to have a sound sleep．At last We'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams．（自己的建議）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇提綱類作文．
寫作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全．通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，列出寫作提綱．