Question

12．假如你的朋友有一幅鄭板橋的畫，要在國際購物網(wǎng)站eBay上出售．根據(jù)下面提示，請為其作簡單英文介紹．

作者	鄭板橋，清代畫家，擅長花卉木石，尤擅寫作
畫作	主題：竹子
	尺寸：138×38cm
	售價(jià)：30000美元
	收藏理由：代表作之一，保存完好，極具升值空間

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
As a well-known painter in Qing dynasty，Zheng Banqiao enjoys great popularity in China all the time．He is famousfor painting flowers and stones，especially bamboos．This painting happens tobe one of his masterpieces on bamboo．It measures 138 centimeters long and 38centimeters wide．Besides，preserved with great care by the former owners，itis still in very good condition．Currently，it is for sale at a price of 30，000dollars．I do believe you have good reasons to buy it．You may keep it forlong if you like．And if you sell it in the future，it is sure to be worth moremoney．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫一篇短文，介紹朋友的將在國際購物網(wǎng)站eBay上出售的鄭板橋的一幅畫的情況．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．作者；2．畫作：主題、尺寸、售價(jià)、收藏理由．  既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．
寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：enjoys great popularity （享譽(yù)盛名），be famousfor （因…而著名），happen to do sth （碰巧做某事），in good condition （狀況良好），for sale （出售），at a price of （以…價(jià)格），be sure to do（肯定會做某事），be worth sth （值得，值…）．
【高分句型】
1．preserved with great care by the former owners，it is still in very good condition．
這里是過去分詞preserved作原因狀語，主句為 it is still in very good condition，主句的主語為it與動(dòng)詞preserve構(gòu)成邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系．
2．And if you sell it in the future，it is sure to be worth more money．
這里是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句為it is sure to be worth more money．
3．I do believe you have good reasons to buy it．
這里是強(qiáng)調(diào)用法．do/does/did+動(dòng)詞原形，意為"我確實(shí)，的確相信你有很好地理由要去買它．"

解答 As a well-known painter in Qing dynasty，Zheng Banqiao enjoys great popularity in China all the time．He is famousfor painting flowers and stones，especially bamboos．（作者） This painting happens to be oneof his masterpieces on bamboo．（主題） Itmeasures 138 centimeters long and 38 centimeters wide．（尺寸） Besides，preserved with great care by the former owners，it is still invery good condition．【高分句型】Currently，it is for sale at a price of30，000 dollars．（售價(jià)）Ido believe you have good reasons to buy it．You may keep it for long if youlike．【高分句型】And if you sell it in the future，it is sure to be worth more money．【高分句型】（收藏理由）

點(diǎn)評 寫好這類圖表提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．