Question

19．假如你是大學(xué)一年級(jí)新生李華．開學(xué)之初，你的英語老師Ms．Li希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議．請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語給她寫一封信．
1、對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；
2、自己目前的英語水平；
3、自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題；
4、對(duì)英語教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右；
2、信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Ms．Li，
I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher．
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Thank you!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于英語學(xué)習(xí)的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；二自己目前的英語水平以及存在的主要問題；三對(duì)英語教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議．
高分句型：
1．Therefore，mastering English means we can see the world through a new window．句子里
mastering English 是動(dòng)名詞做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)；we can see the world through a new window是賓語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that．
因此，掌握了英語意味著我們有了看世界的一個(gè)新的窗口．
2．My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English．句子里that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，和that I often feel nervous when speaking English是兩個(gè)表語從句．
我的英語只是一般，主要的兩個(gè)問題是，一我感到很難記住單詞，二說英語時(shí)我經(jīng)常感到緊張．

解答 Dear Ms Li，
      I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher．As the world is becoming a global village，English is getting more and more important．Therefore，mastering English means we can see the world through a new window．【高分句型一】（對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)）
      My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English．【高分句型二】（自己目前的英語水平以及存在的主要問題）I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words．Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking．I believe we can make much progress in English with your help．（對(duì)英語教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議）
        Thank you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫作時(shí)，我們要根據(jù)情景判斷短文需要的主體時(shí)態(tài)，即搞清楚要寫的是什么時(shí)候的事，過去的就用過去時(shí)．比如日記，是敘述過去發(fā)生的事情，自然用過去時(shí)；通知多用將來時(shí)．