Question

18．I was a volunteer for an organization at the beginning of this year．The organization is aimed at helping children who suffer from cancer．One day，we were asked to raise money for cancer research and program funding at an event．
Since my friend Lisa was also a volunteer for the organization，I went to the event with her．There were many people at the event．After seeing our poster，some people came to us and talked with us．But few people donated money．It was a bit hot that day．Both Lisa and I got really upset．
Half an hour later，Lisa started complaining，"I don't think we can raise much money today．"
"Don't worry．The event lasts for three hours．There is still a lot of time left，"I said，though I also thought poorly of our plan to raise much money that day．
While Lisa and I were talking，a little boy of about eight years old came to us．He stood in front of our poster and started reading．
After a while，he asked，"What is cancer？"
I explained what cancer is．Then I said，"Many people around the world are suffering from cancer．It can be really dangerous．More research is needed to learn about it so that people with it can suffer less．That's why we're collecting money for it．"
"Do children suffer from cancer，too？"asked the boy．
"Yes．Many children suffer from cancer．Some of them may die．They need help，"Lisa said and I nodded．
Hearing that，the boy became sad．Then the boy asked，"How much money have you collected？"
Both Lisa and I were embarrassed to tell him that we didn't raise much money．At last，we said，"Not much．"
The boy looked into our donation container and only saw a few one-dollar and five-dollar bills．The boy said nothing after seeing that and left．Then some girls came to us and we started talking with them．Neither Lisa nor I thought the boy would return．However，about twenty minutes later，the boy did return．

注意：
1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)．

Paragraph 1：
The boy happily ran to us and asked，"Would you take a donation from children？"Lisa and Ilooked at each other．We couldn't believe such a little boywould care．Though we didn't believe it，we said"yes"．The boy put his hand in his pocket and took out some five-dollar bills．He said，"I just asked for them from my mother．I really want to help the children suffering from cancer．"
Paragraph 2：
Both Lisa and I were deeply touched．We thanked the boy，but he left soon．Looking at his back，both Lisa and I were greatly encouraged．We wanted to try harder to raise money．So instead of just standing there，we went to people and told them about our program．At the end of the day，we raised over three thousand dollars，a lot more than Lisa and I had expected in the beginning．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于讀寫任務(wù)類作文，根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容，在讀懂的前提下續(xù)寫文章，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4．續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)．5．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：look at看著；ask for 要求；suffer from遭受；be touched感動(dòng)；in the beginning在開(kāi)始；
He said，"I just asked for them from my mother．I really want to help the children suffering from cancer．"（高分句型一）
So instead of just standing there，we went to people and told them about our program．（高分句型二）

解答 The boy happily ran to us and asked，"Would you take a donation from children？"Lisa and I looked at each other．We couldn't believe such a little boy would care．Though we didn't believe it，we said"yes"．The boy put his hand in his pocket and took out some five-dollar bills．He said，"I just asked for them from my mother．I really want to help the children suffering from cancer．"（高分句型一）
       Both Lisa and I were deeply touched．We thanked the boy，but he left soon．Looking at his back，both Lisa and I were greatly encouraged．We wanted to try harder to raise money．So instead of just standing there，we went to people and told them about our program．（高分句型二）At the end of the day，we raised over three thousand dollars，a lot more than Lisa and I had expected in the beginning．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．