Question

A little girl who lived in a simple and poor house on a hill. Usually she might play in the small garden. She could see over the garden fence and across the valley the wonderful house with shining golden window high on another hill. Since she loved her parents and her family, she desired to live in such a house and dream all day about how wonderful and excited it must feel to live there. At the age when she gained some basic skill, she begged her mother to a bike ride outside the garden. Her mother finally allowed her to go. Down the hill and cross the valley, the girl rode to the gate of the golden house. As she got︿ her bike and put it against the gate post, she focused on the house. She was disappointed when she found all the windows were rather dirty.

Answer 1

小題1:去掉who
小題2:might—would
小題3:the--a
小題4:window--windows
小題5:since—though/although/while
小題6:dream--dreamed
小題7:excited--exciting
小題8:to--for
小題9:cross--across
小題10:加off

試題分析：文章講述了一個(gè)小女孩兒生活在很貧窮的房子里，每天都在院子里玩耍，她看到了山對(duì)面一個(gè)漂亮的房子，盡管她很熱愛她的父母，但她還是希望能住在這樣一個(gè)房子里，等到她長大的時(shí)候，她向父母要了一輛自行車，騎過去之后才知道所有的窗戶都很臟。
小題1:去掉who 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的考查。此處是一完整的句子，不缺少定語從句who是多余的。
小題2:might—would 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的用法。might表示對(duì)事情的推測(cè)，此處表示她會(huì)在小院子里玩耍。故應(yīng)為would.表示意愿。
小題3:the—a 冠詞的用法。泛指一棟漂亮的房子。
小題4:window—windows 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的考查。此處應(yīng)是多個(gè)窗戶，故應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)形式。
小題5:since—though/although/while 連詞的考查。此處表示雖然，盡管的意思，而since表示既然。
句意為：雖然她愛她的父母她的家人，但她還是想住在這樣一個(gè)房子里。
小題6:dream—dreamed 時(shí)態(tài)的考查。與前面的desired是并列的故應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。
小題7:excited—exciting 分詞的用法。居住在那兒感覺一定很美妙令人興奮。真正主語為to live there修飾這一動(dòng)詞不定式應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞形式，故應(yīng)改為exciting.
小題8:to—for 介詞的用法。beg sb for sth祈求某人要什么東西，祈求她的媽媽給她一輛自行車。
小題9:cross—across 介詞的用法。此處后面為名詞，所以這里應(yīng)為介詞，表示“度過，通過”的意思。
cross 為動(dòng)詞；across為介詞。
小題10:加off 此處表示從自行車上下來，所以要加off.
考點(diǎn):考查短文改錯(cuò)。