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13．目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象．某英文雜志社擬就此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文．標(biāo)題是"My Opinion in Cheating in Examination"．請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

主要原因	考試偏多，偏難
	不用功，懶惰
	取悅父母、老師
個人看法	作弊不對，違反校規(guī)
	要誠實，努力學(xué)習(xí)
	…（其他看法）

注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要求，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)
3．字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100字
4．參考詞匯：作弊 cheat （v）勤奮diligent違反校規(guī) goes against the school rules 禁止forbid（forbidden過去分詞）  懲罰punish
My Opinion on Cheating in Examination
At present，some students have picked up a bad habit---cheating in examination．                             

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息以"My Opinion in Cheating in Examination"用英語寫一篇征文稿，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：分別從主要原因和個人看法兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，采用了總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)．開頭段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，第二、三段分析原因并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)．結(jié)構(gòu)清晰：First，Second，Third，In my opinion貫穿全文．此外，本文亮點(diǎn)鮮明，some of which非限制性定語從句，cheating in exams should be forbidden because it not only goes against the school rules but also does great harm to students動名詞作主語，以及諺語的使用"No pains，no gains．"

解答 My opinion on Cheating in Examinations
      At present，a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations．
      There are three main reasons．First，schools have given students too many examinations，some of which are too difficult．（高分句型一）Second，some students are not diligent and they don't work hard at their lessons．More time is wasted playing games or surfing the Internet．Therefore，they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams．Third，students have to do so to satisfy their parents and teachers．
      In my opinion，cheating in exams should be forbidden because it not only goes against the school rules but also does great harm to students．（高分句型二）"No pains，no gains．"We students are supposed to be honest and hardworking．Only in this way，can we improve our study and make progress．（高分句型三）Besides，our teachers should offer fewer examinations and punish those who cheat in the examinations．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．