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4．Two friends have an argument that breaks up their friendship forever，even though neither one can remember how the whole thing got started．Such sad events happen over and over in high schools across the country．In fact，according to an official report on youth violence，"In our country today，the greatest threat to the lives of children and adolescents is not disease or starvation or abandonment，but the terrible reality of violence"．Given that this is the case，why aren't students taught to manage conflicts the way they are taught to solve math problems，or stay physically fit？
A report on violence among high school students indicates that most violent incidents between students begin with daily small matters such as a relatively minor insult （侮辱）．For example，a fight could start over the fact that one student eats a peanut butter sandwich each lunchtime．Laughter over the sandwich can lead to insults，which in turn can lead to violence．The problem isn't in the sandwich，but in the way students deal with the conflict．
    There will always be conflicts in schools，but that doesn't mean there needs to be violence．Learning to resolve（化解）conflicts can help students deal with friends，teachers，parents，bosses，and coworkers．In that way，conflict resolution is a basic life skill that should be taught in schools across the country．
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
 1．以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
 2．以約120詞對(duì)"中學(xué)生產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突"的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：
   1）中學(xué)生產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因；
   2）描述一次你和你的同學(xué)產(chǎn)生矛盾的經(jīng)歷（包括起因，經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果）；
3）談?wù)勅绾握�確解決和同學(xué)的矛盾．
【寫(xiě)作要求】
 1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
 2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作，在總結(jié)材料提供的信息的基礎(chǔ)上完成寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容包括：1）中學(xué)生產(chǎn)生矛盾或沖突的原因；2）描述一次你和你的同學(xué)產(chǎn)生矛盾的經(jīng)歷（包括起因，經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果）；3）談?wù)勅绾握�確解決和同學(xué)的矛盾． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)用第一和第三人稱(chēng)．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：result from （由于，起因于）；deal with （處理）；personalities（性格，個(gè)性）；have a conflict with sb（與某人起沖突）； on duty（值日）；
turn up （出現(xiàn)）；traffic jam（交通堵塞）；tolerant（寬容的，容忍的）．
高分句型：1．Nowadays ①conflicts are often heard among high school students，②which usually results from students'different personalities or holding different attitudes towards something．
                 ①運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；②which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
                 2．I was so angry that I couldn't help yelling at him．
                  使用"so…that…"結(jié)構(gòu)，that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．
                 3．I believe learning to be tolerant with each other plays a constructive role．
                  learning to be tolerant with each other plays a constructive role是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，在這個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句中動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)learning to be tolerant with each other 作從句的主語(yǔ)．

解答 According to the report，conflicts are very common in high schools across the country．And the conflicts usually result from small things．Therefore，students should be taught how to deal with conflicts properly．
     Nowadays conflicts are often heard among high school students，which usually results from students'different personalities or holding different attitudes towards something（高分句型一）．
     I once had a conflict with my classmate，Li Ming．One day，he and I were on duty．But he turned up very late．I was so angry that I couldn't help yelling at him（高分句型二）．He tried to explain．But I wouldn't listen to him．He became angry with me，too．The next day，I learned that Li Ming was delayed because of a traffic jam．I apologized to him．Fortunately，he pardoned me and we became good friends again．
     Classmate conflicts are harmful and need to be settled．I believe learning to be tolerant with each other plays a constructive role（高分句型三）．Meanwhile，communication contributes to solving such problems．

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