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9．A set of textbook designed to help high school student learn about Chinese traditional culture is to be published soon，Beijing Times reported on Monday．
The books are the first national-level works of their kind and have been developed by a working group that promotes traditional culture．They will be used by students from autumn this year，the report said．
The set contains four classics from ancient times．Two of the works，The Confucian Analects and Mencius，are for 10th-grade students，while the other two，Great Learning and Dao De Jing，will be used by 11th graders．
The initiative follows a series of steps the authorities have taken in recent years to spread and promote traditional Chinese culture on campus．
Last April，the Ministry of Education released a series of guidelines requiring the inclusion of more information about traditional culture in primary and middle school textbooks，especially those used for subjects such as Chinese Language，history，art and physical education．
The guidelines said students'knowledge of traditional culture will be tested in the senior high school entrance examination and the gaokao，the college entrance exam．
寫作內(nèi)容1．用約30個單詞寫出上文的概要
      2．用約120個單詞就"高中生學(xué)國學(xué)"這一主題發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）國學(xué)入高中的緣由
（2）你對這一舉動的看法
寫作要求1．闡述觀點或提供論據(jù)時，不能直接引用原文語句
      2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱
      3．不必寫標(biāo)題
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．
From this autumn，new schoolbooks highlighting the traditional Chinese culturewill be used by senior students，whose knowledge of the country's ancient traditions will alsobe tested in the gaokao．
There're several factors accounting for the move．The set of books are thesignificant component of traditional Chinese culture and provide teenagers withinternal codes of conduct and thus they will play a positive role in theirprocess of growth．Besides，the basic education system hasn't attached enough importance to thelearning of traditional culture for quite a long time，and the textbooks are abeneficial effort to reverse that situation．In addition，learning traditional culture is not solely about recitingtexts-it's about utilizing ancient wisdom to solve current problems．
Personally，I strongly support and welcome the move in that it is aninitiative to bring Chinese traditional culture back．However，considering individualdifferences between students，I am not in complete agreement with the practice that theywill be tested in the gaokao．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照"三段式"模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：highlight sth（強調(diào)某事），account for…（解釋…），provide sb with sth （提供某人某事），play a positive rolein…（在…中起積極作用），utilize sth…（利用…），bring Chinesetraditional culture back（恢復(fù)中國傳統(tǒng)文化），be in complete agreement with （完全贊同）．

解答 From this autumn，new schoolbooks highlighting the traditional Chinese culturewill be used by senior students，whose knowledge of the country's ancient traditions will alsobe tested in the gaokao．【高分句型】（概括）
There're several factors accounting for the move．【高分句型】The set of books are the significant component of traditionalChinese culture and provide teenagers with internal codes of conduct and thusthey will play a positive role in their process of growth．Besides，the basic education systemhasn't attached enough importance to the learning of traditional culture forquite a long time，and the textbooks are a beneficial effort to reverse that situation．In addition，learning traditional cultureis not solely about reciting texts-it's about utilizing ancient wisdom to solvecurrent problems．【高分句型】（國學(xué)入高中的原因）
Personally，I strongly support and welcome the move in that it is aninitiative to bring Chinese traditional culture back．However，considering individualdifferences between students，I am not in complete agreement with the practice that theywill be tested in the gaokao．【高分句型】（自己的觀點）

點評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．