Question

5．假如你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)向?qū)W生征文，主題是"十年后的學(xué)校"．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要求和你的想象寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
1．學(xué)校的外觀．
2．教師的教學(xué)方式．
3．學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)方式．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
      2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
                                                                                  
                                                                                 

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇描寫十年之后學(xué)校情況的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般將來時(shí)來敘述．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點(diǎn)明主題；二學(xué)校的外觀，以及硬件設(shè)施；三教師的教學(xué)和學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)；四夢(mèng)想會(huì)成為現(xiàn)實(shí)．
高分句型：
1．First of all，the school yard is going to become a big garden and we will not be disturbed by the noise of the street because of the trees and grassland around it．句子里，disturb表示"打擾"，這里用了將來時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；because of 表示"因?yàn)?，后面用單詞或短語(yǔ)．
首先，學(xué)校會(huì)變成一座大花園，由于學(xué)校周圍的樹木和草坪的遮擋，我們不會(huì)再被街道上的噪音所打擾．
2．In this way，we can learn from teachers and teachers can give us some guidance when we have mistakes，as if we were face to face with our teachers．句子里guidance表示"指導(dǎo)"，as if 表示"好像"，后面用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣．
用這種方式，我們可以向老師請(qǐng)教，當(dāng)我們有錯(cuò)誤時(shí)，老師能及時(shí)給予指導(dǎo)，就好像我們每個(gè)人都和老師面對(duì)面．

解答 Ten years later，our school will change a lot in many ways．（點(diǎn)明主題）
    First of all，the school yard is going to become a big garden and we will not be disturbed by the noise of the street because of the trees and grassland around it．【高分句型一】A big stadium is necessary for us，where we will play football，basketball and some other sports．we will have a morden library and lab，in which we can enhace our horizon，increase our knowledge and improve our practical ability．（學(xué)校的外觀，以及硬件設(shè)施）
     What's more，the way that we study and teachers teach will change a lot as well．There will not be any books on our desks．Instead，each of us will have a computer，which is connected with the teacher's．In this way，we can learn from teachers and teachers can give us some guidance when we have mistakes，as if we were face to face with our teachers．【高分句型二】（教師的教學(xué)和學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)）
     Nowadays，the science technoly is developing faster and faster，so what I describe now is to become a reality in the future．（夢(mèng)想會(huì)成為現(xiàn)實(shí)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
as if 從句用虛擬語(yǔ)氣的情況．
當(dāng)說話人認(rèn)為句子所述的是不真實(shí)的或極少有可能發(fā)生或存在的情況時(shí)．從句虛擬語(yǔ)氣動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的形式如下：
（1）如果從句表示與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般過去時(shí)．如：
You look as if you didn't care． 你看上去好像并不在乎．
（2）從句表示與過去事實(shí)相反，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用"had+過去分詞"．如：
He talks about Rome as if he had been there before． 他說起羅馬來好像他以前去過羅馬似的．
（3）從句表示與將來事實(shí)相反，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用"would/could/might+動(dòng)詞原形"．如：
He opened his mouth as if he would say something．  他張開嘴好像要說什么．