Question

20．假如你是值日班長，你要在班會課上做個發(fā)言，主題是別害怕失�。�
發(fā)言內(nèi)容包括：
（1）對待失敗不同的態(tài)度；
（2）自己的失敗經(jīng)歷；
（3）你的建議．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Hello，everyone．Today my speech is never to be afraid of failure in life． 
As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）Some successful people can constantly get precious lessons from failure．However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
Failure sometimes is more valuable than success．I still remember the experience of learning swimming last summer．I used to be terrified of water．With the encouragement of my coach，I made it at last，despite failing many times．The experience makes me learn something new about myself．
In a word，failure is not horrible．If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息在班會課上做個發(fā)言，主題是別害怕失敗，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）對待失敗不同的態(tài)度；（2）自己的失敗經(jīng)歷；（3）你的建議．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：as we all know  眾所周知；meet with  遇到；遭遇；be more than  大于，多于；be terrified of  害怕…
As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）
 However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，everyone．Today my speech is never to be afraid in life．
     As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型一）Some successful people can constantly get precious lessons from failure．However，others lose confidence when they meet with any hardship，resulting in failure．（高分句型二）
     Failure sometimes is more valuable than success．I still remember the experience of learning swimming last summer．I used to be terrified of water．With the encouragement of my coach，I made it at last，despite failing many times．The experience makes me learn something new about myself．
     In a word，failure is not horrible．If you analyze carefully the reasons why you have failed，you will surely be a success one day．（高分句型三）
     That's all．Thank you．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．